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OG13 Elizabeth Barber, the author of both Prehistoric Textiles,

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Elizabeth Barber, the author of both Prehistoric Textiles, a comprehensive work on cloth in the early cultures of the Mediterranean, and also of Women’s Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture, is an expert authority on textiles in ancient societies.

 

(A) also of Women’s Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture, is an expert authority on

 

(B) also Women’s Work, a more general account of cloth manufacture, is an expert authority about

 

(C) of Women’s Work, a more general account about early cloth manufacture, is an authority on

 

(D) of Women’s Work, a more general account about early cloth manufacture, is an expert authority about

 

(E) Women’s Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture, is an authority on

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    beyondgmatqin 2013-02-21 13:14
    周老师解释：Rhetorical construction; Idiom; Parallelism
    Using a lot of parenthetical elements, this sentence communicates the main idea that Elizabeth Barber is an authority on textiles in ancient societies. It is the main rhetorical goal of the sentence to position the parenthetical elements so that they do not obscure the main idea. The parenthetical descriptions need to be streamlined enough to be informative, but not too long. In addition, several versions repeat of before the title Women's Work and doing so makes the sentence unparallel; the first of comes before both and so should distribute over both clauses.
    A.不平行； expert authority用词重复
    B.also多余； expert authority用词重复； authority 搭配on而不是about
    C.不平行； account 搭配of而不是about
    D.同(A)(C)
    E.CORRECT
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    myice 2013-02-21 14:36
    老师辛苦了
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