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请教OG12-31题 OG答案写得太飘逸...求详解

【Unlike the conviction held by many of her colleagues that genes were 】relatively simple and static, Barbara McClintock adhered to her own more complicated ideas about how genes might operate, and in 1983, at the age of 81, was awarded a Nobel Prize for her discovery that the genes in corn are capable of moving from one chromosomal site to another.
(A) Unlike the conviction held by many of her colleagues that genes were
(B) Although many of her colleagues were of the conviction of genes being
(C) Contrary to many of her colleagues being convinced that genes were
(D) Even though many of her colleagues were convinced that genes were
(E) Even with many of her colleagues convinced of genes being

OG上说,A比较对象不对,这我能理解。
而,BC----wordy and awkward ;E----wordy and indirect...
哪里wordy,哪里awkward。。。晕死了
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