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OG12-137
一般现在时的标志

Joachim Raff and Giacomo Meyerbeer[url=] are examples of the kind of composer[/url][alan1] who receives popular acclaim while living, often goes into decline after death, and never regains popularity again.

(A) often goes into decline after death, and never regains popularity again

(B) whose reputation declines after death and never [url=]regains[/url][alan2] its status again

[url=](C)[/url][alan3] but whose reputation declines after death and never regains its former status

(D) who declines in reputation after death and who never regained popularity again

(E) then has declined in reputation after death and never regained popularity

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[alan1]定语从句描述一个general kind of composer，不用过去时。。

[alan2]regain …again,redundant

[alan3]平行的嵌套

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OG12-91
代词经典问题

Nobody knows exactly how many languages there are in the world, partly because of the difficulty of distinguishing between a language and the sublanguages or dialects within it, but those who have tried to count typically have found about five thousand.

(A) and the sublanguages or dialects within it, but those who have tried to count typically have found

(B) and the sublanguages or dialects within them,with those who have tried counting typically finding

(C) and the sublanguages or dialects within it, but those who have tried counting [url=]it[/url][alan1] typically find

(D) or the sublanguages or dialects within them, but those who tried to count them typically found

(E) or the sublanguages or dialects within them,with those who have tried to count typically finding

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[alan1]又是经典代词问题，注意看后面…have found about five thousand…所以是count them(them 指代languages)

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[url=]OG12-113[/url][alan1]   恶心代词,misplaced prepsitional phrase，长难句的（因果）逻辑结构不能被淡化！！

Because there are provisions of the new maritime code that provide that even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas, they have already stimulated international disputes over uninhabited islands.

(A) Because there are provisions of the new maritime code that provide that even tiny islets

can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas, they have already

stimulated

(B) Because the new maritime code provides that even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the

fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas, [url=]it[/url][alan2] has already stimulated

(C) Even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas [url=]under provisions of the new maritime code[/url][alan3] , already stimulating

(D) Because even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fi sheries and oil fields of large sea

areas under provisions of the new maritime code, this has already stimulated

(E) Because even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fi sheries and oil fields of large sea

areas under provisions of the new maritime code, which is already stimulating

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[alan1]不能改变或淡化句子的因果结构

[alan2]这里是没有歧义的，the maritime code provides that…后面是从句

[alan3]介词短语，位置错误，可能修饰large sea areas

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OG12-[url=]D39[/url][alan1]

more than likely 看平行要瞻前顾后

According to scholars, the earliest writing was probably not a direct rendering of speech, but was

more likely to begin as a separate and distinct symbolic system of communication, and only later

merged with spoken language.

(A) was more likely to begin as

(B) more than likely began as

(C) [url=]more than likely [/url][alan2] beginning from

(D) it was more than likely begun from

(E) it was more likely that it began

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[alan1]平行结构一定要注意没划线部分后面啊（特别是后面还挺长的时候）！！反复强调

[alan2]做副词，是个idiom

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OG12-D42

The Supreme Court has ruled that public universities can collect student activity fees even with students’ objections to particular activities, [url=]so long as[/url][alan1] the groups they give money to will be chosen without regard to their views.

(A) with students’ objections to particular activities, so long as the groups [url=]they[/url][alan2] give money to will be

(B) if they have objections to particular activities and the groups that are given the money are

(C) if they object to particular activities, but the groups that the money is given to have to be

(D) from students who object to particular activities, so long as the groups given money are

(E) though students have an objection to particular activities, but the groups that are given the

money be

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[alan1]这个层次的逻辑意思在选项里不能丢失。but不能表达这层意思

[alan2]代词的antecedent不清晰

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[url=]OG12-D49[/url][alan1]     逻辑重心。。修饰的逻辑

As an actress and, more importantly, as a teacher of acting, Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, who trained several generations of actors including Marlon Brando and Robert De Niro.

(A) Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, [url=]who [/url][alan2] trained several generations of actors including

(B) Stella Adler, one of the most influential artists in the American theater, [url=]traine[/url][alan3] d several generations of actors who include

(C) Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, training several

generations of actors whose ranks included

(D) one of the most influential artists in the American theater was Stella Adler, who trained several [url=]generations of actors including[/url][alan4]

(E) one of the most influential artists in the American theater, Stella Adler, trained several generations of actors whose ranks included

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[alan1]长句子注意原句逻辑重心（主谓）

[alan2]经典错误，定语从句离修饰对象太远。

[alan3]改变了原句的重心

[alan4]看到including,consist of注意理清逻辑关系

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OG12-D51
A of B that…修饰A

By developing the Secure Digital Music Initiative, the recording industry associations of North America, Japan, and Europe hope to create a standardized way of distributing songs and full-length recordings on the Internet [url=]that[/url][alan1] will protect copyright holders and foil the many audio pirates who copy and distribute digital music illegally.

(A)[url=] of distributing[/url][alan2] songs and full-length recordings on the Internet that will protect copyright holders and foil the many audio pirates who copy and distribute

(B) of distributing songs and full-length recordings on the Internet and to protect copyright holders and foiling the many audio pirates copying and distributing

(C) for distributing songs and full-length recordings on the Internet while [url=]it[/url][alan3] protects copyright holders and foils the many audio pirates who copy and distribute

(D) to distribute songs and full-length recordings on the Internet while they will protect copyright

holders and foil the many audio pirates copying and distributing

(E) to distribute songs and full-length recordings on
the Internet and it will protect copyright holders and foiling the many audio pirates who copy and distribute

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[alan1]GMAT说它没有歧义嗯。。A of B that…修饰A!

[alan2]the way of doing 也是正确的

[alan3]指代问题

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PREP07-1
用平行来掩盖逻辑意思的错误，经典！！

To meet the rapidly rising market demand for fish and seafood, suppliers are growing fish twice

as fast as their natural growth rate, cutting their feed allotment by nearly half and raising them

on special diets.

(A) their natural growth rate, cutting their feed allotment

(B) their natural growth rate, their feed allotment cut

[url=](C)[/url][alan1] growing them naturally, cutting their feed allotment

(D) they grow naturally, cutting their feed allotment

(E) they grow naturally, with their feed allotment cut

再来个平行掩饰正确逻辑关系的prep07-17

（其实GMAT烦就烦在正确选项还给你来个belong in 干扰你）

Rejecting the apprenticeship model of training social workers in philanthropic agencies,

twentieth-century reformer Edith Abbott was convinced of social work education belonging in

the university so that students could be offered a broad range of courses dealing with social

issues.

(A) of social work education belonging in the university so that

(B) that social work education [url=]should[/url][alan2] be in the university, [url=]and[/url][alan3] that

(C) about the importance of social work education belonging in the university while

(D) that social work education belonged in the university, where

(E) of the necessity of social work education being in the university and

再来个真题级别的GWD, E选项的设置可谓无耻到极点

GWD25-Q4.

Recent findings lend strong support to the theory that a black hole lies at the center of the Milky Way and of many of the 100 billion other galaxies estimated to exist in the universe.

A.
that a black hole lies at the center of the Milky Way and of

B.
that a black hole lies at the Milky Way’s center and

C.
that there is a black hole lying at the milky Way’s center and

D.
of a black hole lying at the Milky Way’s center and

E.
of a black hole [url=]that lies[/url][alan4] at the center of the Milky Way and of

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[alan1]和原句中的their natrual growth rate矛盾， 虽然看起来平行，但是逻辑上有错误

[alan2]convince 后面不能跟should

[alan3]原句不是表达一个平行的意思

[alan4]这里转化为修饰成分不正确

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PREP07-8
from which/to which 结构后面的动词

The Achaemenid empire of Persia reached the Indus Valley in the fifth century B.C., bringing

the Aramaic script with it, from which was derived both northern and southern Indian alphabets.

(A) the Aramaic script with it, from which was derived both northern and

(B) the Aramaic script with it, and from which deriving both the northern and the

(C) with it the Aramaic script, [url=]from which[/url][alan1] derive [url=]both the northern and the[/url][alan2]

(D) with it the Aramaic script, from which derives both northern and

(E) with it the Aramaic script, and deriving from it both the northern and

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[alan1]结构还原后为 both the northern and the southern Indian alphabets derive from the script.这里derive的主语不是script!!

[alan2]both the northern and the southern

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再看一句类似的

Cajuns speak a dialect brought to southern Louisiana by the 4,000 Acadians who migrated there in 1755; their language is basically seventeenth-century French to which English, Spanish, and Italian words have been added.

PREP07-16
多个and出现，注意区分哪个属于小结构

In her later poems, Phyllis Wheatley's blending of solar imagery, Judeo-Christian thought [url=]and[/url][alan1]

figures, and the images she borrowed from ancient classicism suggesting her range and depth

of influences, not the least of which is her African heritage.

(A) the images she borrowed from ancient classicism suggesting

[url=](B)[/url][alan2] borrowing images from ancient classicism, suggests

(C) she borrowed images from ancient classicism, which suggests

(D) images borrowed from ancient classicism suggests

(E) images that she borrowed from ancient classicism, suggesting

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[alan1]内部小结构的and

[alan2]要正确应该为her borrowing of images from ancient classicism