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6                panovation;   nfdsm;yd72win;     lixian; eilleenliu; bemyself2010         "V1 Employers should have the right to keep the employees from engage in 坏习惯, both in workforce or in personal lives.

V2 Employers have the rights to prohibit the unhealthy behaviors of employees, both in the workplace and their personal lives"                9.16         9.16         9.18         9.18         9.21         9.21

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4                Dechu;trandee; sarahLS; sabrina90125        How effectively a student learn depends more on the quality of the other student than the quality of the teachers.                9.16         9.20         9.21         9.24

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3        B5        vijo；qizuko;hide23        public figures should avoid expressing opinions about things they do not personally experience.        SHEET3        9.16         9.16         9.17

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4                rikkina；tianjinerzhong;   zhaoyusee； 马甲A        The most experienced candidate is usually the best candidate for the leadership position.（一个最有经验的员工往往是领导职位的最佳人选）        SHEET5        9.16         9.16         9.18         9.23        

Main point:   狗4

public figures should avoid expressing opinions in public about things that they have not personally experienced or been directly affected by

On the one hand, normally public figures have many followers who treat the public figures as model, if public figures express themselves in a nonresponsible and superficial way, their followers may act accordingly.

Moreover, public figures are just human being like each of us, they are, in most cases, good at one field. It is unrealistic to expect them to give correct answers to all public questions. It is highly possible they will give non-sense answer to a question they never experienced or heard of.
Admittedly, it is hard to prevent all public figures from doing so since the wide spreading internet, TV programs. The possible way lies in educate public to listen to public figures with caution.

Overstate    狗4
the importance of the personal exp => There are many other ways to
butress an opinion: eg. education, research, discussion, learn from the past (other people's experience).
Oversimplify the issue => a
lead should speak for the people. So a lead does not qualify to speak for poors if he has never been poor in his life?

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2        5        Jessielynn； kzf369        All groups and organizations should function as teams in which everyone makes decisions and shares responsibilities and duties. Giving one person central authority and responsibility for a project or task is not an effective way to get work done.        SHEET2        9.16         9.26

犬5

第一段说确实没experience不能服众，因为没完成过自己手头上东西的人党领导大家很难信赖，比如克林顿逃兵役，就是个污点。Morover无法指导大家渡过难关。这貌似是另外一个作文的题目。
但是这不是说experience是唯一铸造leader的东西，一个好的leader还有知人善用，并且还要鼓励士气。
然后分两段写，鼓励士气是因为大家都是自私的，而团体目标有时候需要个人牺牲，因此需要大家开心的和合作交流之类的。知人善用是因为大家可能都觉得自己很牛，但是让学engineering的人去做销售经理显然是不合适的。

犬6（2）题库5
Thesis sentence: it is true that team work is the most familiar functional way that adopted by many groups and organizations. It is also true that every team member should share responsibilities and duties within the team. However, it is hardly true that the absence of central authority that enables everybody to make decisions is an effective way to get work done. 
Admittedly
1，所有人共同担负责任确实更有效
   Compared with giving the responsibility for a task to one authoritative person, the sharing of responsibilities and duties among team members is a more effective way to get things done. 
The allocated responsibility and duties give workers the feeling of being important and necessary that motivated them to fulfill their work.
The fact that anyone who dose not accomplish his or her assigned work thus affect the whole progress of the project could be easily detected, gives the necessary pressure to workers that guarantee the efficiency thus the completion of the project.
Nevertheless, that is not to say, people in a team should make decisions together.
1，但所有人都参与决策比一人决策效率高的说法不正确
   The claim that letting everyone to make decision rather than giving one person central authority is a more effective way to get things down is unwarranted.
   Everybody makes decisions totally no decisions.
Not everyone has acquired the essential abilities such as thorough analysis and foresighted prediction to make decisions.

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2        105        loverwy;        zhisnoopy        "A society is measured more by scientific and artistic achievenments than by business successes.
"        SHEET4        9.16         9.20

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2                loveoaple; michael2011         Celebrities are uniquely qualified to address social problems, because of their high status and access to resources.                9.16         9.20
犬8  范文
“The value of any nation should be measured more by its scientific and artistic achievements than by its business successes.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
It is tempting to concede the speaker’s opinion that achievements in art and science are more significant to the worth of a nation than its “mere” business successes. Still, I disagree with the view because it overlooks the several ways that commercial success supports artistic accomplishment and scientific progress. It also ignores the extent to which commercial success renders a nation more secure, and better able to promote human rights and political stability throughout the world.
First of all, art and science have always depended upon the patronage of successful business. Consider Italy’s powerful banking clan, the Medici family, and their support for artists such as Michelangelo (米开朗基罗[1475-1564,意大利文艺复兴时期成就卓著的科学家,艺术家]) and Raphael. Substantial scientific and artistic support now comes from foundations established by extraordinarily successful business families like the Rockefellers, Gettys, Carnegies and Mellons. In addition to their private-sector foundation funding, successful businesses also pay taxes that are returned to university art and science programs. And, many businesses form partnerships with universities to further scientific discovery and related technological progress. Finally, both art and science are highly successful business enterprises in their own right.
Secondly, the value of a nation is related to its ability to defend itself, and to help promote peace and justice among other nations. A nation is more capable in both regards when its businesses enjoy greater success. For example, the current return of Kosovars to their homeland was facilitated by a cost-intensive military effort that required funding from, among other sources, tax revenues from business. In addition, a wealthy nation can, by means of its trade agreements, use its economic strength to encourage other countries to extend greater human rights to their citizens. Finally, a wealthy nation can depend on an expansive weapons industry in the private sector; and it can fund an effective military to carry out national defense.
In sum, it is simplistic to suppose that achievement in art and science is more important to the value of a nation than the success of its businesses. The latter is essential to national and world security. And, business success is deeply connected to accomplishment in art and science.

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狗10
"Thesis sentence:
To conserve the energy resources is a worldwide project; however, individual nations have been taken the responsibilities of energy conservation initiatively without international leadership."
"Admittedly
自私是人的天性。
Selfish is a human character.
No country would like to sacrifice itself to conserve energy while no other countries to do the same. If there is no such an organization, it is idealistic to expect individual nations to sacrifice its own interests to conserve energy."
"全球合作确实起到重要作用。
International leadership and worldwide cooperation do play important roles in the protection of energy resources.
OPEC is one of the best examples. OPEC, the Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries, is an international organization of eleven developing countries that are heavily reliant on oil revenues as their main source of income. Since oil revenues are so vital（关键的） for the economic development of these nations, they aim to bring stability and harmony（融洽） to the oil market by adjusting their oil output to help ensure a balance between supply and demand. The stabilized out-put has helped to cease the problem of over-refining（提纯） and over-utilization（使用） of oil energy for a long time.
"
"Nevertheless，that is not to say, it is impossible for individual nations to conserve energy independently.
1，不是说单个国家牺牲是不可能的
   Factors other than international leadership and world wide cooperation have driven individual nations to conserve energy. These countries conserve energy purely for their own benefit in the future.
Japan is a country naturally with nearly no energy resources, so it make great effort to conserve energy for future generations. A famous case is that Japan once brought crude oil from other countries and buried it under the sea."

5        15        loveumyangel;     CharleneWang;    emilysmile; woyouhuashuo; anqi_ren        "Nations should cooperate to develop regulations that limit children’s access to adult material on the Internet.”*
*The Internet is a worldwide computer network"        SHEET2        9.16         9.16         9.19         9.21         9.24

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2                loveoaple; michael2011         Celebrities are uniquely qualified to address social problems, because of their high status and access to resources.                9.16         9.20

犬8  范文
“The value of any nation should be measured more by its scientific and artistic achievements than by its business successes.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
It is tempting to concede the speaker’s opinion that achievements in art and science are more significant to the worth of a nation than its “mere” business successes. Still, I disagree with the view because it overlooks the several ways that commercial success supports artistic accomplishment and scientific progress. It also ignores the extent to which commercial success renders a nation more secure, and better able to promote human rights and political stability throughout the world.
First of all, art and science have always depended upon the patronage of successful business. Consider Italy’s powerful banking clan, the Medici family, and their support for artists such as Michelangelo (米开朗基罗[1475-1564,意大利文艺复兴时期成就卓著的科学家,艺术家]) and Raphael. Substantial scientific and artistic support now comes from foundations established by extraordinarily successful business families like the Rockefellers, Gettys, Carnegies and Mellons. In addition to their private-sector foundation funding, successful businesses also pay taxes that are returned to university art and science programs. And, many businesses form partnerships with universities to further scientific discovery and related technological progress. Finally, both art and science are highly successful business enterprises in their own right.
Secondly, the value of a nation is related to its ability to defend itself, and to help promote peace and justice among other nations. A nation is more capable in both regards when its businesses enjoy greater success. For example, the current return of Kosovars to their homeland was facilitated by a cost-intensive military effort that required funding from, among other sources, tax revenues from business. In addition, a wealthy nation can, by means of its trade agreements, use its economic strength to encourage other countries to extend greater human rights to their citizens. Finally, a wealthy nation can depend on an expansive weapons industry in the private sector; and it can fund an effective military to carry out national defense.
In sum, it is simplistic to suppose that achievement in art and science is more important to the value of a nation than the success of its businesses. The latter is essential to national and world security. And, business success is deeply connected to accomplishment in art and science.

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2        2        hyl_0212； walker31        “It is unrealistic to expect individual nations to make, independently, the sacrifices necessary to conserve energy. International leadership and worldwide cooperation are essential if we expect to protect the world’s energy resources for future generations.”        SHEET7        9.16         9.25