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James老师,我又过了一遍OG11里的语法题,好像还有很多基础的东西不懂,麻烦你帮忙解答哦  [em64]

都是OG11黄色那本里的语法题,按照原题目编号的,谢谢老师 :P

2.     Of all the vast tides of migration that have swept through history, maybe none is more concentrated  as the wave that brought 12 million immigrants onto American shores in little more than three decades.fficeffice" />

(A)         maybe none is more concentrated as

(B)         it may be that none is more concentrated as

(C)        perhaps it is none that is more concentrated than

(D)        maybe it is none that was more concentrated than

(E)         perhaps none was more concentrated than

it is none that 是否可以理解为强调句式,强调none,为什么说D不对?

4.    A survey by the National Council of Churches showed that in 1986 there were 20,736 female ministers, almost 9 percent of the nation's clergy, twice as much as 1977.

(A)         ffice:word" />twice as much as 1977

(B)         twice as many as 1977

(C)        double what it was in 1977

(D)        double the figure for 1977

(E)         a number double that of 1977's

B改成twice as many as in 1977是否就对?比较对象是什么,是20736female ministers还是9percent

D中的double是什么词性?D选项在原句中属于什么结构?

6.Like the idolization accorded the Bront?s and  Browninqs, James Joyce and Virginia Woolf are often subjected to the kind of veneration that blurs the distinction between the artist and the human being.

?非划线部分如何翻译更好?

be subjected to……意思从属于

8.      Rising inventories, when unaccompanied correspondingly  by increases in sales, can lead to production cutbacks that would hamper economic growth.

(A)            when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead

(B)           when not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, possibly leads

(C)           when they were unaccompanied by corresponding sales increases, can lead

(D)           if not accompanied by correspondingly increased sales, possibly leads

(E)           if not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, can lead

Diction + Logical predication

The modifying phrase when ... sales is needlessly difficult to understand. The adverb correspondingly is incorrectly and ambiguously used; using the adjective corresponding to modify increases in sales makes the intended meaning more clear. Unaccompanied is not wrong but not accompanied puts greater emphasis on the negative. When indicates a period of time; if indicates a condition. If is preferable here.

A Correspondingly is awkward and ambiguous; when is used to refer to a condition

B Plural subject inventories does not agree with the singular verb leads; when is used to refer to a condition

C Past tense were indicates a completed event, but can lead indicates a possibility that continues; when is used to refer to a condition

D Correspondingly increased sales is awkward and unclear; verb (leads) does not agree with the subject (inventories)

E Correct. Lf properly introduces a condition in this sentence; not accompanied emphasizes the negative; corresponding modifies increases in sales, the modifier is clear and comprehensible.

?解释C中说when is used to refer to a condition,而前面的解释是when indicates a period of time

Dcorrespondingly 修饰adj increased为什么不对呢?

12. After gradual declension down to about 39 hours in 1970, the workweek in the United States has steadily increased to the point that the average worker now puts in an estimated 164 extra hours of paid labor a year.

(A)         After gradual declension down

(B)           Following a gradual declension down

(C)        After gradual declining down

(D)        After gradually declining

(E)           Following gradually declining

?原句如何翻译,特别是the average worker now puts in an estimated 164 extra hours 这里的average是指普通的意思吗?可否改成the worker now averagely puts in

15.    The Iroquois were primarily planters, but supple­menting their cultivation of maize, squash, and beans with fishing and hunting.

(A)         but supplementing

(B)         and had supplemented

(C)        and even though they supplemented

(D)           although they supplemented

(E)           but with supplementing

?首句中的primarily修饰系动词were吗? 是不是不能改成primary修饰名词planters

19.  In virtually all types of tissue in every animal species, dioxin induces the production of enzymes that are the organism's trying to metabolize, or  render harmless, the chemical that is irritating it.

A trying to metabolize, or render harmless, the chemical that is irritating it

B trying that it metabolize, or render harmless, the chemical irritant

C attempt to try to metabolize, or render harmless, such a chemical irritant

D attempt to try and metabolize, or render harmless, the chemical irritating it

E attempt to metabolize, or render harmless, the chemical irritant

that后面如何翻译?

20.  Based on accounts of various ancient writers, scholars have painted a sketchy picture of the activities of an all-female cult that, perhaps as early as the sixth century BC, worshipped a goddess known in Latin as Bona Dea, "the good goddess."

(A)            Based on accounts of various ancient writers

(B)           Basing it on various ancient writers' accounts

(C)        With accounts of various ancient writers used for a basis

(D)           By the accounts of various ancient writers they used

E    Using accounts of various ancient writer

?如果A改成 basing on……是否就对?

37.    In one of the bloodiest battles of the Civil War, fought at Sharpsburg, Maryland, on September 17, 1862, four times as many Americans  were killed as would later be killed on the beaches of Normandy during D-Day.

(A)         Americans were killed as

(B)         Americans were killed than

(C)        Americans were killed than those who

(D)           more Americans were killed as there

(E)           more Americans were killed as those who

as many …. as前后平行的比较对象分别是什么?

?第二个as后面是省略了Americans吗?

39.   Scientists have recently discovered what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth, a giant fungus that is an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles spawned by a single fertilized spore some 10,000 years ago and extending for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.

(A)         extending

(B)         extends

(C)        extended

(D)           it extended

(E)           is extending

?还是不太理解A spawned extending时态不一致 ,如果翻译成中文,如何体现时态不同所表达的意思?

 

57. Affording strategic proximity to the Strait of Gibraltar, Morocco was also of interest to the French throughout the first half of the twentieth century because they assumed that if they did not hold it,  their grip on Algeria was always insecure.

A if they did not hold it, their grip on Algeria was always insecure

B without it their grip on Algeria would never be secure

C their grip on Algeria was not ever secure if they did not hold it

D without that, they could never be secure about their grip on Algeria

E never would their grip on Algeria be secure if they did not hold it

E中如果不考虑it指代有误这一点,其用never would是否可以理解为倒装表示强调呢?

59. His studies of ice-polished rocks in his Alpine homeland, far outside the range of present-day glaciers, led Louis Agassiz in 1837 to propose the concept of an age in which great ice sheets had  existed in now currently temperate areas.

B in which great ice sheets existed in what are now temperate areas

?不懂选项中what are now…这个结构,这里的what指代areas吗?

75. Salt deposits and moisture threaten to destroy the Mohenjo-Daro excavation in Pakistan, the site of an ancient civilization that flourished at the same time as  the civilizations in the Nile delta and the river valleys of the Tigris and Euphrates.

(A)         that flourished at the same time as the civilizations

(B)         that had flourished at the same time as had the civilizations

(C)        that flourished at the same time those had

(D)        flourishing at the same time as those did

(E)           flourishing at the same time as those were

at the same time as中的as后面是否需遵从as做比较用法时必须连接两个句子的规定?这里的as后面只是加了名词?

81. In an effort to reduce their inventories, Italian vintners have cut prices; their wines have been  priced to sell, and they are.

(A)            have been priced to sell, and they are

(B)           are priced to sell, and they have

(C)           are priced to sell, and they do

(D)           are being priced to sell, and have

(E)           had been priced to sell, and they have

C中的they指代什么?是指 Italian vintners还是wines?是否造成指代不清的错误?

90. The peaks of a mountain range, acting like rocks in a streambed, produce ripples in the air flowing over them; the resulting flow pattern, with crests and  troughs that remain stationary although the air that  forms them is moving rapidly, are known as "standing waves."

(A)          crests and troughs that remain stationary although the air that forms them is moving rapidly, are

(B)         crests and troughs that remain stationary although they are formed by rapidly moving air, are

(C)         crests and troughs that remain stationary although the air that forms them is moving rapidly, is

(D)         stationary crests and troughs although the air that forms them is moving rapidly, are

(E) stationary crests and troughs although they are formed by rapidly moving air, is

E中是否错在they指代有问题?用被动句式是否也不好?

93. By a vote of 9 to 0, the Supreme Court awarded the Central Intelligence Agency broad discretionary powers enabling it to withhold from the public the identities of its sources of intelligence information.

(A)         enabling it to withhold from the public

(B)         for it to withhold from the public

(C)        for withholding disclosure to the public of

(D)        that enable them to withhold from public disclosure

(E)         that they can withhold public disclosure of

enabling是否可以替换成that enable?如何区分用v-ing还是用that呢?翻译?

97. The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are  in motion just as the planets are, yet being so far away from Earth that their apparent positions in the, sky do not change enough for their movement to be observed during a single human lifetime.

(A)         The stars, some of them at tremendous speeds, are in motion just as the planets are, yet being

(B)         Like the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are

(C)        Although like the planets the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, yet

(D)        As the planets, the stars are in motion, some of them at tremendous speeds, but they are

(E)         The stars are in motion like the planets, some of which at tremendous speeds are in motion but

B中的themthey不会有指代不清吗?planets or stars

102. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully  coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

A Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,

B In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

C In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives,

D Beatrix Potter Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations

E Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

?D中改成coordinating变成主动,是否就可以表明是Beatrix的行为,是否就对?不太理解这句话的意思?

104. Nuclear fusion is the force that powers the Sun, the stars, and hydrogen bombs, merging the nuclei of atoms  and not splitbnq them apart, as in nuclear reactors.

A merging the nuclei of atoms and not splitting them apart, as in nuclear reactors

B merging the nuclei of atoms instead of splitting them apart, like nuclear reactors

C merging the nuclei of atoms rather than splitting them apart, as nuclear reactors do

D and merges the nuclei of atoms but does not split them apart, as is done in nuclear reactors

E and merges the nuclei of atoms, unlike atomic reactors that split them apart

?如何判断用merging还是and merges,好像对这类区分动词形式的题比较迷糊?

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QUOTE:
以下是引用James在2009-10-11 17:16:00的发言:
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是题目太简单了 还是量太大呢   嘿嘿 [em65]

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量太大了... 一般来说 我们每个主题下面只发一道题

这样方便大家解答 也方便以后的同学查阅

所以我建议你 把上面的题目拆一拆 分成不同的主题

 

 

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大熊熊小蜜蜂同学,你好可爱啊!哇哈哈!

题目还是一道题一道题的发吧,这样也方便james老师解答!

 

另外,James老师名气好大呀!大家都来找你问问题啦!!!!!!

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辛苦James老师了,嘻嘻

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大熊熊小蜜蜂同学貌似是深度潜水员哇,来了这么久了,只发了四个帖子。。。。。。

还是为james老师发的。。。。。james老师的魅力真大

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以下是引用stream在2009-11-12 15:50:00的发言:

大熊熊小蜜蜂同学貌似是深度潜水员哇,来了这么久了,只发了四个帖子。。。。。。

还是为james老师发的。。。。。james老师的魅力真大

那是相当崇拜james老师滴[em80]

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呵呵,捧个场,期待verbal老师的大作
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