8月GMAT考试 AWA机经（AA+AI各29篇）附写作模板

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上海一战740，JJ回馈，知足了（附有牛人的作文模板，有兴趣的可以参考一下）

 

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AA:

 

1、  地区前两年发展了三个BALABALA店，该地区带来了business increase,所以作者认为在B district 发展类似的三种生意，并且投资于前两种生意的人将得到赠送的第三项生意的分成。这种激励机制将给该地区带来最大的回报。

2、An argument from the head of HR dept. in an automobile company:    

Study shows that employees of not-for-profit organizations, compared to those of for-profit organizations, are more likely to perform well when their performance is not monitored and evaluated. Interviews with employees of not-for-profit organizations also show shat they have more motivation. They believe that their work is important to improve the society. They have personal reasons to perform well, even without financial returns. Therefore, our corporation should donate a significant portion of the overall profit to humanity, to increase the motivation and productivity of the employees, and thus to increase the profit. 

3、关于Helios城市的，大家可以查一下。大概是说这个城市失业率低，是工业中心，有对科技开发的attraction，所以想设分部的corporation应该look at it。

4、(2次)The following appeared in an Avia Airlines departmental memorandum.

“On average, 9 out of every 1,000 passengers who traveled on Avia Airlines last year filed a complaint about our baggage-handling procedures. This means that although some 1 percent of our passengers were unhappy with those procedures, the overwhelming majority were quite satisfied with them; thus it would appear that a review of the procedures is not important to our goal of maintaining or increasing the number of Avia’s passengers.”

5、是关于一个叫TAKE HEART的健身中心的，大家就用这个关键词去找找吧；

6、 P Airline,去年profit下降，油价上涨，今年新开了航班，business analyst说今年新开的航班导致去年profit decline, therefore, new flights must be eliminated.

7、 大概说是通过某国想降低糖的价格解决贸易的deficit
8、“Local clothing stores reported that their profits decreased, on average, for the three-month period between August 1and October 31. Stores that sell products for the home reported that, on average, their profits increased during this same period. Clearly, consumers are choosing to buy products for their homes instead of clothing. To take advantage of this trend, we should reduce the size of our clothing departments and enlarge our home furnishings and household products departments.”

 

9、(2次)Werneria tourism declined for past five years, because the pollution make their national parks become less attractive than before. They find a huge mineral deposit at the national park area, so the advisor indicate that let the mining company to explore the deposit. ...... Permitting the mining of the deposit is the best way to thrive economically.

 

10. 以下内容来自某Newspaper Editorial: 两年前Nova High School为三个academic subjects买了一批电脑并引入了电脑辅助教学，之后发现学校的dropout rate有明显降低，并且有了更多的achievements。因此作者建议，将来Nova High School的budget里要买更多的电脑，并且这个地区里的所有学校也要买电脑并引入电脑辅助教学。

 

11．city of helios应该成为公司发展新业务或者建立新Office的首选，因为这个城市比周边地区有更低的失业率，同时制造业领域也提供了比周边地区更多的就业机会，因此城市想吸引那些高科技innovative technologies来城市发展。

 

12.AA105. The following appeared in an editorial from a newspaper serving the town of Saluda.

“The Saluda Consolidated High School offers over 200 different courses from which its students can choose. A much smaller private school down the street offers a basic curriculum of only 80 different courses, but it consistently sends a higher proportion of its graduating seniors on to college than Consolidated does. By eliminating at least half of the courses offered there and focusing on a basic curriculum, we could improve student performance at Consolidated and also save many tax dollars.”

 

13. Apex公司给其经理买电脑,用于下班后在家工作.工作效率增长.因此建议别的公司也给其员工买电脑,可以提高工作效率,并增加公司利润.(好像是黄金里的题.大家查一下.)

 

14、讲最近一段时间以来电子图书发展的很快，这种方式下都是免费或者价格很低廉的。因此literature classic会被wided read。近期的调查显示，有80%多的人认为会在网上读电子书，有70%多的人认为literature classic很重要。因此，我们应该投资E-classic公司，这家公司专门做网上literature classic电子书的。

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  15 黄金32：

The following appeared in the editorial section of a West Cambria newspaper.

“A recent review of the West Cambria volunteer ambulance service revealed a longer average response time to accidents than was reported by a commercial ambulance squad located in East Cambria. In order to provide better patient care for accident victims and to raise revenue for our town by collecting service fees for ambulance use, we should disband our volunteer service and hire a commercial ambulance service.”

Discuss how well reasoned... etc.

 16．The following appeared as part of an article in the education section of a Waymarsh City newspaper.

“Throughout the last two decades, those who earned graduate degrees found it very difficult to get jobs teaching their academic specialties at the college level. Those with graduate degrees from Waymarsh University had an especially hard time finding such jobs. But better times are coming in the next decade for all academic job seekers, including those from Waymarsh. Demographic trends indicate that an increasing number of people will be reaching college age over the next ten years; consequently, we can expect that the job market will improve dramatically for people seeking college-level teaching positions in their fields.”

一个地区某所大学的graduate students很难在college找到教书的职位。但是这个情况很快会得到改变，因为10年内到达读大学年龄的人会有较大幅度的增长。所以作者project未来十年内所有graduate students，包含某大学graduate students在内找工作的前景会变好。

其中一个可以攻击的点是，这些到达念大学年龄的人不见得都去念大学。。。。。

 17. The following appeared in a memorandum from the Director of Human Resources to the executive officers of Company X.

“Last year, we surveyed our employees on improvements needed at Company X by having them rank, in order of importance, the issues presented in a list of possible improvements. Improved communications between employees and management was consistently ranked as the issue of highest importance by the employees who responded to the survey. As you know, we have since instituted regular communications sessions conducted by high-level management, which the employees can attend on a voluntary basis. Therefore, it is likely that most employees at Company X now feel that the improvement most needed at the company has been made.”

 18。一个地区的3种行业在过去两年有增长，所以我们要在另一种地区投资这3种行业，我们可以通过给顾客回扣来增加收入，获得更大利润……

19。“The construction last year of a shopping mall in downtown Oak City was a mistake. Since the mall has opened, a number of local businesses have closed, and the downtown area suffers from an acute parking shortage, and arrests for crime and vagrancy have increased in the nearby Oak City Park. Elm City should pay attention to the example of the Oak City mall and deny the application to build a shopping mall in Elm City.”

去年Oak市进行的商业区购物大厦的建设是一个错误。自从购物大厦开业以来，许多当地商店都关门了，城市商业区也深受停车匮乏之苦，Oak市立公园附近地区逮捕的犯罪和流浪汉也增加了。Elm市应当注意Oak市购物大厦这一例子，拒绝批准在Elm时建设购物大厦的申请。

 

20。The following appeared in a memorandum from the development director of the Largo Piano Company.

“The Largo Piano Company has long been known for producing carefully handcrafted, expensive pianos used by leading concert pianists. During the past few years, however, our revenues have declined; meanwhile, the Allegro Musical Instrument Company introduced a line of inexpensive digital pianos and then saw its revenues increase. In order to increase Largo’s sales and in fact outsell Allegro, we should introduce a line of digital pianos in a variety of price ranges. Our digital pianos would be likely to find instant acceptance with customers, since they would be associated with the prestigious Largo name.”

一个做钢琴的公司生育不错当好像利润下降了，但是另一个做电子琴的公司利润上升了，然后前面公司就想开始做电子琴。

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 21．“Over time, the costs of processing go down because as organizations learn how to do things better, they become more efficient. In color film processing, for example, the cost of a 3-by-5-inch print fell from 50 cents for five-day service in 1970 to 20 cents for one-day service in 1984. The same principle applies to the processing of food. And since Olympic Foods will soon celebrate its twenty-fifth birthday, we can expect that our long experience will enable us to minimize costs and thus maximize profits.”

22．说一个坐落在大学城的小饭店的老板发现饭店某种产品的sales增加了很多，于是决定再开三个这样的饭店在neighborhood town 和CITIES，并且提拔自从原始饭店开张后就跟他学艺的三个人提拔为这三个新饭店的经理，期望profit 能翻三倍。

 

 23.说市场上有个什么牌子的Software，用于会计professional的,有advanced technology. 说话的这个也是卖software但是是non-professional的，他们发现，much of our competitors are selling out than us. From the survey, the professional customers are repeatedly saying that 什么牌子的Software 有advanced technology,所以就下结论，the most efficient way to increase the sale 就是要增加advanced technology

 

 24．一个公司以前所有的operation都在一个location, 在有了regional offices之后profit反而减少了.所以公司决定关掉它的regional office,以提高它的利润. 关掉分公司也可以减低成本和更好的掌控员工.

 

 27. 一个信用卡公司可以提高他们在同行业中的竞争力，通过向某个慈善机构捐款，并且让这个慈善机构的logo被使用在这个公司的信用卡上。因为recent poll shows that most of people are concerned with envirmental issues.所以该公司的这个新政策，可以获得 higher interest rates than the lowest rates available.

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25. 是那篇关于冰激凌店，银行是否贷款，因为该地区气候寒冷，影响销售。

 

26. 一个公司的新品种麦片的销量不好，但是所有尝过的顾客都说这是所有尝过的麦片中口感最好的，公司某人（不确定什么职位）就说：很显然是因为顾客不知道我们的麦片维他命K的含量比其他公司麦片高20%。 并且打算要进行重新设计广告牌，让顾客都知道我们的麦片比别人高。

27．大学附属医院和私利医院哪个好

28．Due to the decline demand of the mining technology, all the realted corporations are sufferring form decline of profit and sales this year, including Blastcom Corporation. Blastcom Corporation is considering adopting one growth strategy: to shift some of the researchers from mining technology to the renewable energy technology, the demand for the renewable enenergy such as solar energy. Some of the prominent companies which markets the renewable energy are successful in recent years. Therefore, it is garanteed that company X will also be successful in the furture by providing renewable energy.

 

29．大致意思是 一家公司在新增一个药店后,利润上涨了20%,因此推知现在的顾客越来越倾向于一战式购物.于是说在未来两年还应该增加汽车维修等类似的服务。 而且在未来的几十年中应该增加越来越多的部门. 成为这个地方唯一能够提供这么多种类服务的商店将给这个商店带来优势.

 

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AI：
    

1、(2次)Scientists are continually redefining the standards for what is beneficial or harmful to the environment. Since these standards keep shifting, companies should resist changing their products and processes in response to each new recommendation until those recommendations become government regulations.

2、（3次）Best teachers should expect students to challenge popular ideas.

3、  （2次） 有人说organizations or groups最好是teamwork and 大家make decision and share responsibility. 比 centralization of responsibility and authority要好。
    

4、“Technology ultimately separates and alienates people more than it serves to bring them together.”

5、(2次)“With the increasing emphasis on a global economy and international cooperation, people need to understand that their role as citizens of the world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country.”

 现在globalization中，人们相对于自己做本国公民的role来讲更应该懂得自己做世界公民的role。
6、（3次）Today, it seems there are more and more people are becoming respectful for one another’s difference.

7、（3次）体育活动应该和课业同样重要

Physical activity and sports are as important in students' education as academics.
8、公司和其他组织都过度强调团队合作的作用，但其实真正起作用的是那些有能力得到大家认可的个人。

9、（3次）Employers benefit more from the energy and new idea of younger works than the experience and wisdom of older workers.公司得益来自年轻员工比来自年老员工多

10. （2次）员工应该被参与工作环境的设计。/员工有没有权力选择工作环境的

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11.公司是注重innovation还是要注重improvement？类似这个意思。

12.If a nation is to ensure its own economic success, it must maintain a highly competitive educational system in which students compete among themselves and against students from other countries

13. （2次）The most effective business leaders are those who maintain the highest ethical standards.  

14.    （2次）"Nations should cooperate to develop regulations that limit children's access to adult material on the Internet."

15．traditionally, location is one of the most important factor for business success. The importance of location has not changed even the  internet and other communications has developed a lot.

 16. The primary function of schools is to teach academic skills, not to teach ethical and social vaules.

17．（2次）the most effective way to maximize profits is to use highest standard of ethics.

18.  A society should be measured more on scientific and artistic achievements than on business successes.

20．说教育become the surest element of success,就像以前的MONEY 和property 一样

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21．A powerful leader has more opportunity to influence the course of a community or a nation than any government official

22. employees should keep their personal life as separate as possible from their work.

23. 在广告，电视，电影等娱乐项目中暴力画面的使用，使这些娱乐项目得到了商业成功，所以，这些娱乐项目的creator应该继续使用暴力画面。

24. 问你公司的long term success 是不是depend on job satisfaction and job security felt by the employee.

25. Providing health care for all citizens is the fundamental responsibility of a government.

26. 黄金80中的33题~

“People are likely to accept as a leader only someone who has demonstrated an ability to perform the same tasks that he or she expects others to perform.”

26．The constant innovation and change within an organization are as likely to damage the organization as to improve it.

27．第34道，说公民应该参加公益活动

28．“As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.”