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再[转帖]来自太傻的作文摸版。
发信人: CnF (ClimbAndFord,简称CnF), 信区: EnglishTest
标 题: 要你命3000改进版-作文拿这个模板上吧
发信站: BBS 水木清华站 (Thu May 9 16:08:54 2002)
要你命3000-作文拿这个模板上吧
请英语好的同学看一下有没有什么结构、语法和用词上的不妥!谢谢!
本文系综合《TWE填空作文法》,朱泰琪的考研作文模板,还有水木上Skytarget和twoc
up等诸多大牛的作文模板而成。
( )表示可有可无的话,字不够就加上。[ a/b/c]表示方括号内由/分开的几句话选一句
。
(一) 对立观点式
(1)给出两个对立的事物或者一个事物对立的两个方面,要求考生支持一方并进行说明。
具体表述如下:
TOPIC: Some people like A; others like B. Which one do you prefer
-- A or B? Give specific reasons and examples to illustrate your answ
er.
(2)给出两个对立事物或一个事物对立的两个方面,要求考生说明二者为什么不同或比较
它们的优缺点,并给出理由。
具体表述如下:
TOPIC: Some people believe that A while others consider B more appr
opriate. Give advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and
explain which position you support.
对立观点式的三种模板:
1.人们往往看到B的明显优点而忽视了它的缺点,同时A的内在优势没有被重视。
第一段:To choose A or choose B is something of a dilemma to the public beca
use they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and ne
glect the genuinely good aspects of A.
第二段:[For B, people are often driven to believe that / It is quite easy f
or common people to CHOOSE B because of the obvious reason that] ……. (As a
proverb says, "Everything has two sides".) Although B does have its seeming
ly profound advantages, mean time [there lie intrinsic [harmful characterist
ics/drawbacks] in it such as …… / it can be achieved only conditionally be
cause……] . Some [people/experts] [maintain/warn] that……. However, it is
often overlooked by [the public/most people]. (Therefore we have no complete
evidence to suggest that B is always better than A.)
第三段: Unfortunately, the innate quality of A is often underestimated.
或:What is more, if you notice the invisible benefits of CHOOSING A, you ca
n understand A more deeply.
Here I would explain a few of the most important reasons for choosing A.
第一点原因。第二点原因。第三点原因。(列举原因的句式见最后的"通用句型")
第四段:Therefore from what we have discussed, we may safely come to the con
clusion that CHOOSING AAA is a rather wise decision.
2.选A还是选B的确是一个热门话题,我们来研究一下,A比B至少有三大优势:1,2,3
。
第一段:There is no denying the fact that …(whether to choose A or B is bet
ter) is a popular topic which is much talked about [not only by …, but also
by …/by people across the world/ in a modern society].
或:There is no denying the fact that …(whether to choose A or B is better)
is a popular topic which has caused heated debate over a long period of tim
e (because it affects everybody in his or her daily lives).
或:In a modern society, people always face the dilemma of whether to choose
A or B. This problem is a much-debated one in that it affects everybody in
his or her daily lives.
或:(如果是针对某一事件的题目,不是什么popular topic)If …(it is announced
that a new movie theater may be built …), I will not surprise to see … (w
hether to choose A or B is better) become a popular topic which is much talk
ed about not only by …, but also by …
Although it seems that [ [normally/sometimes] we can not tell which one outw
eigh the other between A and B / they normally coexist peacefully], they des
erve some close examination.
[If three criteria were taken into account, in comparing these two, I would
prefer A. / As far as I am concerned, I vote for the latter]. There are no l
ess than three advantages in A as rendered below:
第二段 第一点原因。第二点原因。第三点原因。
第三段In conclusion, (it must be explained that these three reasons sometim
es intertwine to FORM an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than
any one of them.) Only these three reasons can make a person draw the concl
usion that … , not to mention there are more.
3.选A还是选B的确是一个热门话题,我们来研究一下,二者各有优势,不过我来选的话
,A的优点还是比B多。
第一段前两句同2,第三句
While both the two [methods/choices] may have their advantages and disadvant
ages, they can be applied under different circumstances. Afterwards, I will
explain my opinion about it.
第二段:[A has the obvious advantage that / One very strong argument for A i
s that] ……. But there lies intrinsic harmful characteristic in this method
. Some [people/expert] [maintain/warn] that…… Furthermore, ……. Therefore
we have no complete evidence to suggest that A is always better than B.
第三段:On the other hand, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, Fo
r example, …… .
However, again it is important to see that under certain circumstances B wil
l……(disadvantage)
或:Yet there are some people who cast serious doubts on B
或:Although B does have its seemingly profound [advantages/ reason], mean t
ime[there lie intrinsic [harmful characteristics/drawbacks] in it such as …
… / it can be achieved only conditionally because……] .
第四段:(针对我个人的情况又可以说出一套理由)But if all these factors are c
ontemplated, [as far as I am concerned / according to my personality and fon
dness], the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B because A fits
[me/us students] better in two ways: In the first place, ……, In the seco
nd place/secondly,……Therefore from what we have discussed, we may safely c
ome to the conclusion that CHOOSING AAA is a rather wise decision.
或:(我个人的情况说不出什么新的理由,只好说我觉得A优点就是比B多)
It seems, very difficult for us to prefer one to another because all of them
have their advantages and disadvantages to the extent that it is hard to di
stinguish. Yet that does not mean that they are all the same to me. Which on
e I prefer depends on my own experience, life style and [emotional concerns
/ educational background/…]. [As far as I am concerned / According to my pe
rsonality and fondness/ To be frank], I would like to choose A, because ther
e are too many benefits that outnumber its disadvantages not to choose it. B
, on the other hand, has advantages no more than its disadvantages.
(二)单一观点式
(1)给出一个论点,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由。
具体表述如下:
TOPIC: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? AA
A. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
(2)给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由
。
具体表述如下:
TOPIC: A is superior to B in DONG C. Do you agree or disagree wit
h this statement? Use specific reasons to support your point of vie
w
注:在模板中用A、B表示相比较的两个事物,这种形式与对立观点式有着很大的相
似之处,考生可以进行适当的借鉴。
我认为(2)不如就用对立观点式的模板得了。(1)的两种模板如下:
1.disagree这个问题的确是个热门话题,支持的人的理由是……,但是它的错误在于…
…
第一段:There is no denying the fact that …(if one should … /if … is righ
t) is a hot topic which is much talked about [not only by …, but also by …
/by people across the world/ in a modern society].
或:There is no denying the fact that …(if one should … /if … is right) i
s a popular topic which has caused heated debate over a long period of time
(because it affects everybody in his or her daily lives).
或:There is no denying the fact that …(if one should … /if … is right) i
s a basic (moral/philosophical) problem that can not be circumvented by anyb
ody,( because the opinion on this problem will determine one’s attitude towa
rd the world and the life).
或:(如果是针对某一事件的题目,不是什么popular topic)If …(it is announced
that a new movie theater may be built …), I will not surprise to see … (w
hether the plan should be supported or opposed) become a popular topic which
is much talked about not only by …, but also by …
Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to take a glance at the
arguments on both sides.
第二段:People who support AAA usually give (some, even all of) the followin
g reasons. 第一点 原因。第二点原因。第三点原因。
第三段:At the first glance, the opinion saying yes to the above question pe
rhaps sounds reasonable and appealing. Nevertheless, [many people do not thi
nk this view can hold water / we can find that it presents us with numerous
negative effects along with its benefits.]
或:Although …(the opinion in question) does have its seemingly profound [a
dvantages/reason], mean time [there lie intrinsic [harmful characteristics/d
rawbacks/faults] in [it/this method] such as …… / it can be achieved only
conditionally because……] .
Some [people/expert] [maintain/warn] that……. Unfortunately, it is often ov
erlooked by [the public/most people]. (Therefore we have no complete evidenc
e to conclude that the statement is right.) What is more, …
第四段:In a word, despite the fact that we must admit the argument I disagr
ee does hold a little bit of water, I think that…
2.Agree或disagree都可以用。这个问题的确是个热门话题,乍一看不好说,不能仓促
下结论,但是我同意/不同意它,至少有3条理由:1,2,3。(下面是按agree写的,容
易改为disagree的模板)
第一段第一句同1 ,第二句
At first glance it seems very difficult for us to draw a [definite/quick] co
nclusion that … is right or wrong, [because it has both advantages and disa
dvantages / since everything has two sides]. However, after serious consider
ations we can see that under most circumstances …(this approach) [will do m
ore good than harm / is a rather wise viewpoint].
或:As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion. However, it is unfai
r to draw a quick conclusion without serious considerations.
There are no less than [three advantages in A/three reasons to agree with th
e opinion] as rendered below:
第二段 第一点原因。第二点原因。第三点原因。
第三段In conclusion, (it must be explained that these three reasons sometim
es intertwine to FORM an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than
any one of them.) Only these three reasons can make [a person/me] draw the
conclusion that ④ , not to mention there are more.
(三)选择观点式
具体表述如下:
TOPIC: In order to do XXX, there are many ways: A, B, C, D……. W
hich do you choose? Give specific reasons and examples to illustrate
your answer.
注:在模板中用大写XXX表示一件事情,A,B,C,D代表做此事所用的不同方
法。这种命题形式不为多见。
1.这么多东东好难挑啊,但是只考虑我个人的喜好,我选A,选A至少有三条好处:1,2
,3。所以我得出结论A好。当然这仅限于我。
第一段It seems, in so many items, very difficult for us to prefer one to ano
ther because all of them have their advantages( and disadvantages) to the ex
tent that it is hard to distinguish. Yet that does not mean they are all the
same to me. Which one I prefer depends on my own experience, life style and
[emotional concerns / educational background/…]. To be frank, I would pref
er A if personal quality is considered as a criterion to choose things. (How
ever, it is unfair to draw a quick conclusion without serious considerations
.) There are no less than three advantages in A as rendered below:
第二段 第一点原因。第二点原因。第三点原因。
第三段In conclusion, (it must be explained that these three reasons sometim
es intertwine to FORM an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than
any one of them.) Only these three reasons can make me draw the conclusion
that ④ , not to mention there are more ([reasons/advantages of A]
that can account for my fondness for it). (Anyway, it is confined to me, an
d different persons can make different choices according to their personalit
y and fondness.)
(四)分析列举式
具体表述如下:
人们喜欢参观博物馆,分析一下都有什么原因……你认为一个好邻居应该有哪些品质…
…有人搬到你们城市,你认为他会对这个城市有些什么看法……
两种模板:
1.……的确是一个值得探讨的话题。不同的人有不同的看法,有的认为……,有的认为
……,还有的认为……我认为最重要的一点是……
第一段:There is no denying the fact that (why/how/what) … is a hot topic w
hich is much talked about [not only by …, but also by … /by people across
the world/ in a modern society].
或:There is no denying the fact that (why/how/what) … is a popular topic w
hich has caused heated debate over a long period of time (because it affects
everybody in his or her daily lives).
或:There is no denying the fact that (why/how/what) … is a basic (moral/ph
ilosophical) problem that can not be circumvented by anybody,( because the o
pinion on this problem will determine one’s attitude toward the world and th
e life).
或:(如果是针对某一事件的题目,不是什么popular topic)…(Why people visit m
useums) is a interesting question that deserves careful investigation not on
ly by...(museum managers), but also by …(visitors themselves).
People with different experience, life style and [emotional concerns / educa
tional background/…] differ greatly in their attitudes toward this [problem
/question].
第二段:Some people hold the opinion that … Others, [however/on the contrar
y], maintain that … Still others, convinced by the view that …, argue that
…According to them,…
2.……的确是一个值得探讨的话题。人们看法比较一致,第一第二第三。我认为最重要
的一点是……
第一段第一句同1。第二句:
Somewhat surprisingly, people with different experience, life style and [emo
tional concerns / educational background/…] share similar attitudes toward
this [problem/question]. They usually [give some, even all of the following
reasons / consider some, even all of the following points [important/ necess
ary / desirable /advisable] ].
第二段:第一点第二点第三点
第三段:In a word, …(the three points mentioned above) are the main [reason
/desirable quality/…] of …. But as far as I am concerned, I consider the [
chief reason/ most important quality] is …
或:In a word, …(the three points mentioned above) are the main opinions on
… hold by [common/most] people. But in my point of view, … has more advan
tages than disadvantages under most circumstances.
一些通用的句型:(不好固定在某个模板中,而是在每个模板中都可以用到)
This may explain why ……/As a consequence……
It goes without saying that……
In fact, we can observe easily that in modern society,……
As a proverb says, "Everything has two sides".
As a proverb says, "Where there is a will there is a way".
As is known to all, "No pains, no gains."
Let’s bring our discussion here to a more present and practical context. In
today’s world,……
I can say that if you have no experiences like these, your life is an inadeq
uate one.
be of great benefit/damage to sb./sth.
The reason of … is not so much … as …
People differ greatly in their attitudes towards this problem. Some people h
old the opinion that … Others, [ however/on the contrary], maintain that …
It is [urgent/necessary/convienient/desirable/advisable] for sb. to do sth.
have [trouble/a difficult time] [in doing sth./with sth.]
举例证:It can be given by a (well known/concrete) example that ……. / In o
rder to see this point clearly, let us to see an example:……/To illustrate
this, there is an example that is very persuasive:…….
第一点原因:
The main/first reason is that …….
First, we can observe easily that in modern society, ...
In the first place
To begin with, (a good roommate should …)
第二点原因:
Besides, the further reason why I advocate AAA is that …….
[The second/another] reason for [my/people’s] propensity for A is that …
[The second/another] desirable quality for a good roommate is that …
第三点原因:
Moreover,……
The third reason, [not the last/however], goes this way: …
写完三条原因还可以再写:Maybe there are some other reasons( to show…). But
it is generally believed that the reasons mentioned above are commonly accep
table.
最后意犹未尽或者字数不够可以加这么一句:Nevertheless I must admit that peopl
e can do well without AAA, but no one can ignore the additional convenience
and satisfaction offered by AAA. Such experience will definitely be helpful
in one’s later life. (你想要我不会不给你,你不想要我也不会强迫你要,大家讲道
理吗……)
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字就叫做要你命3000!——TWE填空作文法、新东方TWE讲座、朱泰琪的考研作文模板……
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