Inlate 1997, the chambers inside the pyramid of the Pharaoh Menkaure at Giza
wereclosed to visitors for cleaning and repair due to moistureexhaled by tourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt fromthe stone was crystallizing and fungus was growing on the walls.A. due to moisture exhaled bytourists, which raised its humidity to such levels so that salt from the stone was crystallizing
B. due to moisture thattourists had exhaled, thereby raising its humidity to such levels that saltfrom the stone would crystallize
C. because tourists wereexhaling moisture, which had raised the humidity within them to levels suchthat salt from the stone would crystallize
D. because of moisture thatwas exhaled by tourists raising the humidity within them to levels so high asto make the salt from the stone crystallize
A项中to such level so that 在OG中没有指出这是错误的,难道这样用时正确的?
我怎么觉得是wordy啊。
请指教,谢谢 |