问.....大家帮忙！！ 呵呵

卧室春竹

那位有什么对付写作的办法？？

我都想放弃写作了...  什么都写不出来啊？？

今天看了一个issue 题目如下

由于政府官僚作风盛行 是的民众与政府的关系更为疏远了

根本不知道怎么写  什么算官僚？？
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卧室春竹

恩.....

谢谢大家 我怎么就大不开思路呢........

唉！~.....  谢谢 大家......

steven.wei

we can find lots of bureaucracy in our nearby environment, and it is not difficult for us to find such evidence to support the topic.

joywzy

1, in politics, government bureaucracy  causes damage to democracy, thus thus seperating the citizens from the government
1) the democracy is a system of duputies , but in bureaucrtic government fail to compose the representives of the citizens.
2) the primary principle of democracy is equality, but bureacracy usually breaks such rule

2, in economy, government bureaucracy  hinder the development of economy , thus seperating the citizens from the government
1)legislation can not reflect the need of citizens
2)administration is ineffetive
example: X town in Y country, citizens fail to invest the town for government bureaucracy  

3, solution
1)establish a system in government that reflect the ideas of citizens
2) set up supervison system

Louisa_xy

"As government bureaucracy increases,citizens become more and more seperated from their government."

Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion above. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or readings.

卧室春竹

由于政府官僚作风盛行 是的民众与政府的关系更为疏远了

joywzy

这样好些。

卧室春竹

那就讨论一下这个官僚 问题...........

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joywzy

里面是例子和提纲，你可以参考

另外，800 score awa 也很好，你可以参考

难的issu 我们可以一起讨论

steven.wei

u may try to buy suyuan's composition book which is green papered one. i suppose that u could find some practical sentences and ideas there. and you have prepare your own composition models( composition constructure) to prepare awa. good luck.