求助涛涛--09--41

johncheng

Q41.

Marconi’s conception of the radio was as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation; instead, it is precisely the opposite, a tool for communicating with a large, public audience.

1. Marconi’s conception of the radio was as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation; instead, it is
2. Marconi conceived of the radio as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation, but which is
3. Marconi conceived of the radio as a tool for private conversation that could substitute for the telephone; instead, it has become
4. Marconi conceived of the radio to be a tool for private conversation, a substitute for the telephone, which has become
5. Marconi conceived of the radio to be a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation, other than what it is,

the answer is E but i saw that of the other version is C. which one is right?

i do not think that conceive of sth to be is a proper usage to word conceive. And " it" in C  appropraitely referred to the radio. Thus i prefer C

appreciation for help 

uniqueness

 ETS  好像 偏向于用 conceive to be   estimate to be 

wzt

C里面错误太多了

first: the refrent of 'it' is unclear, does it refer to radio,telephone, or tool????

sec: the use of 'instead' is not favoured by GMAC, 'other than' is similar with 'rather than' which is the better than 'instead'.

third: the biggest mistake of C is the use of 'that' clause to modify 'telehpone', since the orignal modifier 'a tool......' is Parallel with the following 'a tool.......'. Parallelism is the most important aspect in the SC.

fourth: conceive of sth to be sth. It's not likely everything is proper with 'as'

johncheng

that 是指代前面的 tool，instead 有这样用过的，我不记得了，好像是大全还是gwd里出现过的

rosemarys

 C里的that从句指代不明确,而且那个instead一般不那么用吧,一般是放在句末.

Jarod

Ditto!

飘雨的午后

I prefer C too