GWD 28-12

knight9514

28-12: Over the next few years, increasing demands on the LACE>LACENAME>ChattahoocheeLACENAME> LACETYPE>RiverLACETYPE>LACE>, which flows into the LACE>LACENAME>ApalachicolaLACENAME> LACETYPE>River, could alter the saline content of Apalachicola Bay, which would rob the oysters there of their flavor, and to make them decrease in size, less distinctive, and less in demand.

A: which would rob the oysters there of their flavor, and to make them decrease in size

B: and it would rob the oysters there of their flavor, make them smaller

C: and rob the oysters there of their flavor, making them decrease in size

D: robbing the oysters there of their flavor and making them smaller

E: robbing the oysters there of their flavor, and making them decrease in size

我手中的三份答案有两个选C一份选D；我选D

我觉得rob和make 应平行。

大家意见如何？

steveyangxt

agree to d. there are flows in the other four chioces, as monicars pointed out. the coma before and  in e is not necessary, in my opinion.

monicars

我也选D

A: which would rob the oysters there of their flavor, and to make them decrease in size--不并列

B: and it would rob the oysters there of their flavor, make them smaller---缺连词

C: and rob the oysters there of their flavor, making them decrease in size----同意楼上说

E: robbing the oysters there of their flavor, and making them decrease in size

E中的，and应该没有问题吧？

sammen

i agree with you, I prfer D.