OG-SC-105

yqhpsyche

105.Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A)Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
OG上解释说，coordinating confuses the sequence of time with respect to the past tense of the main verb capitalized→coordinating应该是分词，产生时态上的问题？

(B)In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C)In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(D)Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E)Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
OG上解释说，coordinated dose not clearly modify book illustrations→coordinated的发出者应该是BP，为什么要修饰illustrations？是什么意思？

SiyangWu

A 主语 BP，接 coordininating 很奇怪呀，应该是 BP coordinated 或 BP coordinates. 就是主语加谓语。后面也有错误，them 找不到指谁
B 说不好，
D 的意思是，BP与她写的故事很协调。
E 还是them的问题

rucstarchan

这道体完全没懂，我选的是D，为什么不行呀~

genius1824

我也觉得E项可以啊，两个并列的动词，coordinated与后面的capitalized

sevenmileser

楼上说“E的意思是BP 被coordinated，意思错了。”

BP在E中好像并没有被coordinated的意思啊。coordinated与后面的capitalized

构成并列平行啊，都是主动。

zhanghappy

首先是BP coordinate illustrations with her narratives，而E的意思是BP 被coordinated，意思错了。
A选项，coordinate这个行为与capitalize on 这个行为在时间顺序上不是伴随状态。