8月21日换题库后——GMAT作文新题AA汇总

pansy

1. stan_yu 760; tatashishi; AppleStrudel 3次
The following appeared as part of a recommendation from the business manager of a department store.
“Local clothing stores reported that their profits decreased, on average, for the three-month period between August 1 and October 31. Stores that sell products for the home reported that, on average, their profits increased during this same period. Clearly, consumers are choosing to buy products for their homes instead of clothing. To take advantage of this trend, we should reduce the size of our clothing departments and enlarge our home furnishings and household products departments.” （pool第72题）
提纲：
1.        A period of three month is too short to draw a general conclusion of the overall trend.
2.        The past three months' trend does not guarantee the same in the future.
3.        Whether the reports from the local clothing stores and stores that sell products for the home are reliable or not are still open to doubt, thus making the author's suggestion groundless.

小宇宙2010

MANY  THANKS !!!!!!

valiants

题库要在哪里下载啊？我一直找不到。麻烦给个网址，谢谢~

chriswendy35

many  thanks !!!

pansy

34 koberoy
The following appeared in a memorandum fromthe development director of the Largo Piano Company.
“The Largo Piano Company has long beenknown for producing carefully handcrafted, expensive pianos used by leadingconcert pianists. During the past few years, however, our revenues havedeclined; meanwhile, the Allegro Musical Instrument Company introduced a lineof inexpensive digital pianos and then saw its revenues increase. In order toincrease Largo
’ssales and in fact outsell Allegro, we should introduce a line of digital pianosin a variety of price ranges. Our digital pianos would be likely to findinstant acceptance with customers, since they would be associated with theprestigious Largo name.”Discuss how well reasoned... etc.

pansy

32. jethrowen
汽车销售商说：在把高档汽车放在展厅的一个月，sales增加；把廉价汽车放在展厅的一个月,sales减少。所以总结出：把高级汽车放在展厅能提高profits.

33 梦想守护者
The following appeared as part of a business plan created by the management of the Take Heart Fitness Center.
“After opening the new swimming pool early last summer, Take Heart saw a 12 percent increase in the use of the center by members. Therefore, in order to increase the number of our members and thus our revenues, which depend on membership fees, we should continue to add new recreational facilities in subsequent years: for example, a multipurpose game room, a tennis court, and a miniature golf course. Being the only center in the area offering this range of activities would give us a competitive advantage in the health and recreation market.” (pool No.108)

pansy

30. rainow88 chuckcs0703 2次
budget committee 建议一个软件公司效仿汽车行业 雇佣临时工的那个

31. cherryruj; LIURAN1988 2次
Now is the perfect time to buy a house in our city. Over the past five years, average home prices in our region have nearly doubled. But average stock prices in the national stock market have actually declined over the same period. So homeowners have seen an increase in value for their housing investment during the last five years that far exceeds what they could have made by investing in the stock market. Our city’s resident can surely achieve a similar profit over the next five years. Furthermore, if residents invest in a home, they can enjoy the use of the home while its value increases, whereas money invested in stocks would not contribute to their quality of life in the same way that owning a home would. Therefore, all the residents of our city should invest their money in a home.

pansy

提纲：
1.对事故的反映时间诚然是评价服务质量的一个因素但并不是唯一的因素.所以仅仅因为东区的商业救护班的反映时间短就认定商业救护办的服务更好是gratuitous的.
2.就算东区的商业班的服务质量更好也并不意味着,西区用商业班就会有一样的成效.因为东西区的情况是不同的.很可能西区的志愿者更有服务,献身意识.
3.此外除非商业班收十分昂贵的服务费用或者有十分多的事故事实这些都是不可能的, 改成商业是不见得就可以给该镇增加很多税收的.所以把这一点作为理由是不正确的.

1.错误类比 两个城市不一样，很可能因为西和东的不一样，比如，路的情况traffic condition。可能东的车辆更好。服务的态度更好。
而且没有说东的志愿情况如何，很可能东的志愿比商业的快。
2.草率的判断：就算是商业的更快，也不一定更好。反映时间不是唯一的因素，有其他——比如服务的质量，态度，器材等等。
另外，除非商业可以charge considerable fees 或者 accident rate非常高，否则未必带来可观的revenue。

A. In the first place, the arguer ignores other factors that might account for the longer average response time as revealed bu the recent review.
B. In the second place, the arguer infairly reduces better patient care to shorter response time to accidents.
C. Finally, the arguer fails to support the claim that hiring a commercial ambulance service would automatically raise revenue for West Cambria.

pansy

28.
Technology separate and a~~~（这单词我不认识，长的也许和alliance有点关系） people more than they serves to bring people together

29. 宋宋 Bluebird0100（2次）
The following appeared in the editorial section of a West Cambria newspaper.
“A recent review of the West Cambria volunteer ambulance service revealed a longer average response time to accidents than was reported by a commercial ambulance squad located in East Cambria. In order to provide better patient care for accident victims and to raise revenue for our town by collecting service fees for ambulance use, we should disband our volunteer service and hire a commercial ambulance service.” (pool第32题)

pansy

27. wangjing726
有一个调查发现现在的人对健康饮食很有兴趣，而健康饮食的一个方法就是吃有机食品。于是一个健身机构的经理就说，要在每个机构里设置一个有机食品的店，这样的话就可以增加利润了。
考古
V1: 考到的是说一个gym做了一个调查，说他们的customers is interested in eating healthier.而organic food没有农药，很绿色。所以他们觉得要在他们的三个gym的location都开一个organic food section。并且说这个organic food的想法之前都没有人想到过。所以在nation大量推广这个想法之前，他们在自己的gym里开个organic food sections一定能提高他们的profits.
V2: A survey shows that our consumers are more cared about eating healthier. One way to eat healthy is to eat organic food, which is free of fertilizer and pesticide. Our city has no organic food store currently, so we can establish one in our city. We can open organic food store in our gyms so that we can expect that the profits of our gyms, which stayed the same for a year, would increase.