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captain_mas

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on
her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating
them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully
coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix
Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinated them with her narratives and
为什么不选D呢，怎么看出来D是修饰illustration的呢

captain_mas

D中独立主格的逻辑主语不是Beatrix Potter吗

captain_mas

怎么看出来的her book illustrations 做 capitalized的主语呢，in her book illustrations不是一个介词短语吗

hedgeforfu

Carefully coordinated with her narratives
这个应该是独立主格吧？
独立主格的逻辑主语是逐句的主语，即Beatrix Potter，而不是her illustrations

xiao19870205

capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
你选D的话，就是her book illustrations 做 capitalized的主语
显然逻辑有问题。