argument
In this argument, the author concludes that…
The conclusion is based both on the fact that… and on the survey result that…
While the argument has some merits, it omits some important concerns that need to be addressed to substantiate the argument.
To sum up, this argument is not persuasive as it stands.
To render the argument logically acceptable, the author would have to demonstrate that… and that…
In addition, only with more concrete and more convincing evidence could this argument become more than just an emotional appeal.
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