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tonisun2008

1. Charlotte Perkins Gilman, a late nineteenth-century feminist, called for urban apartment houses including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities.

(A) including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities

(B) that included child-care facilities, and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities

(C) with child-care facilities included and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities

(D) that included child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities（D）

(E) to include child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities included

A错在那里？

tonisun2008

"for example, it was hard to tell whether Gilman called for urban apartment

houses that included childcare facilities or whether such facilities represent

one variety of the urban apartment houses she wanted built."不是很懂这个区别,可不

可以再讲详细点呢？麻烦了。

Maggiewjys

The function and meaning of the including… phrases are unclear in choice A:

for example, it is hard to tell whether Gilman called for urban apartment houses

that included childcare facilities or whether such facilities represent one

variety 种类of the urban apartment houses she wanted built. Choice B resolves the

ambiguity concerning child-care facilities, but called for…houses to include…

facilities is unidiomatic in B and C. Choice D is best. In E, to include is again

faulty. This question is more difficult than the average.