AI9思路请教

windrobin

Employees should keep their private lives and personal activities as separate as posiible from the workplace.

写了一整晚..还是破烂作文一篇..请求支持..

excellent

请正反两方面来写。先写在工作间里适度的私人事件可能会使得工作气氛更加和谐，从而提高工作效率；然后写如果在工作时间过度的从事私人活动，既影响了别人的工作，又减缓了工作效率，最终导致企业的利润下降。

大概就是这个思路！

祝您好运！

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success2002

fistly,the separation between the private lives and personal activities is helpful in improving the performance of the employees. for example,frequent phone call ....瞎编一通
sencondly, employees that can not  keep their private lives and personal activities separate from the workplace is  difficult to establish the good relationship with cowrkers.
for example 你的一个同事在上班时喜欢处理一些私人事情，因为这样，打扰了别人，也不能高质量的完成工作，让别人帮干活，因此让同事讨厌

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