vagrant

以下是引用pieyvonne在2005-8-5 11:23:00的发言：

如果改成：by thematic intensity ，没有 on,可以么？

有“on”反而就错了。这里表并列的介词是------by。

pieyvonne

3.The first people to live in----- Hawaii were the polynesians, who sailed there in large canoes from other Pacific Islands about 2000 years ago.

now where is / what is now/ what now is 为什么what is now 对？ 其他那里错了？

pieyvonne

还有几个问题：

1. The modern detective story, in which a detective solves a crime by discovering and interpreting evidence, is considered to have originated with Edgar Allan Poe`s “the Murders in the Rue Morgue” in the 1984 . in 1984 , 为什么用 have originated ? 不用 originated ？

2. Henry David Thoreau was an American writer who is remembered for his faith in the religious significance of the nature.

who is remembered 可以么，不用时态统一？ of the nature 要改成 of nature ？

thanks!

pieyvonne

如果改成：by thematic intensity ，没有 on,可以么？

crossmoon

以下是引用pieyvonne在2005-8-4 21:30:00的发言：

还有一个问题：

The ballad is characterized by informal diction, by a narrative largely dependent on action and dialogue, by thematic intense,and by stress on repetition.

by thematic intense 改成 by thematic on intense?

是平行结构的原因么？

那on 前面的词的词形不用平行么? stress 是名词，其他adj?

thanks !

是平行结构，by thematic intense 改成 by thematic intensity。

stress是名词，其他并列的也是名词啊：diction，narrative，intense。

crossmoon

以下是引用pieyvonne在2005-8-4 16:42:00的发言：

谢谢版主 把问题都回答完了，十分感谢

不过最后一道题，我还是不明白，最后一题：it 代： 那个组织，是一个宾语从句，可以省略引导词，这样理解不行么？

envitontally 不是副词么？怎么修饰harm?

谢谢

sorry,这题我看得不仔细。你的理解是正确的，it 没有问题。envitontally harm这地方错了，要么换成：envitontally harmful; 要么换成 envitontal harm.

pieyvonne

还有一个问题：

The ballad is characterized by informal diction, by a narrative largely dependent on action and dialogue, by thematic intense,and by stress on repetition.

by thematic intense 改成 by thematic on intense?

是平行结构的原因么？

那on 前面的词的词形不用平行么? stress 是名词，其他adj?

thanks !

pieyvonne

谢谢版主 把问题都回答完了，十分感谢

不过最后一道题，我还是不明白，最后一题：it 代： 那个组织，是一个宾语从句，可以省略引导词，这样理解不行么？

envitontally 不是副词么？怎么修饰harm?

谢谢

vagrant

谢谢crossmoon，一口气解答了那么多问题，呵呵

crossmoon

以下是引用pieyvonne在2005-7-29 1:34:00的发言：

11． Daylight saving time came into useful in the U.S. in an effort to conserve electricity by having business hours correspond to the hours of natural daylight. 怎么错了？ 这句什么意思啊？

12. Essential a nineteenth-century instrument, the calliope was usually played outdoors and was a part of fairs, holiday gatherings, and other such activities. 怎么改，为什么？

Green peace, an international organization of environmental activists founded b Canadians, uses nonviolent means to protest and block activities it considers environmentally harm. 为什么 it 不对？harm 对？harmfuul?

11. come into 后面接名词，可以改为 came into a use 或者 came into being useful

12. Essential 后面缺了as

13。it 不对，应该改成which 或that