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4. 写作
综合写作其实难度不大,只要大家听力练好了, 基本没问题。注意写文章的时候, 每段开头要写听力中的point, 然后再写这个点怎么反驳文章的point.
独立写作。我最开始接触独立写作的时候 有点懵。因为平时写essay 的时候, 都是先去search infor, 然后用这些infor 来写essay, 能用一句话写的东西 绝对不能
用两句话。 可是阿托的写作 让我觉得 在考我扯淡的能力。你必须要把你的point 解释的很详细,很具体。所以,大家一定要多练,多发散下思维。强烈推荐大家
去看高分120 的写作。读完这书之后, 我发现了两招不错的可以扯淡的方法。第一,就是举例。当你把所有的point 都都写完了,但是字数还不够的时候, 你就
开始举例。给大家看我写的文~~
External appearances provide important clues about a person.
I partially agree with the notion that external appearance provides important clues about a person.
External appearance can imply the social position of a person. The rich tend to pay more attention to their appearance and therefore usually wear better and fashionable clothes. On the contrary, since the poor don’t have enough money, they are less concerned with their appearance and therefore they often wear some cheap and plain clothes.
External appearance also reflects some characteristics of people, carefulness for example.
Since careful people always pursue perfectiveness, they notice every detail. Accordingly, their clothes are usually clean and neat. In contrast, those careless people tend to be untidy and sloppy.
However, judging a person by external appearance is far from enough. Sometimes, inside beauty says more. Characters such as positive attitude, diligence, and passion are more valuable than just good external experience. Since these good characters are not easily identified in a short time, we need to spend time getting in touch with people. In addition, we have to take into consideration the fact that some people pretend to be from a higher class by ** their external appearance more attractive.
I am a 22-year-old college student majoring in Finance. I used to have a roommate called Anne. At the first time I saw her, I thought she was a pretty elegant girl having a good family background since she wore really fancy clothes and even make-ups. However, as time passed by, my opinion about her changed. Yes, she was really careful about her appearance. Every time she went out with her friends, she spent at least one hour choosing clothes and wearing make-ups. Nonetheless, she paid no attention to our dormitory. She was such a sloppy and random girl that she put things wherever she likes. The room was such a mass. What was worse, she never cleaned the dormitory. It was a nightmare living with her for the whole year. From her, I learned a lesson that external appearance cannot tell everything about a person.
In conclusion, external appearance does provide important clues about a person in the sense that it reflects people’s social position and some of their characters. However, we have to notice that external appearance is not everything about a person. Sometimes, inside beauty weighs more. |
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