pieyvonne

还有一个问题：

The ballad is characterized by informal diction, by a narrative largely dependent on action and dialogue, by thematic intense,and by stress on repetition.

by thematic intense 改成 by thematic on intense?

是平行结构的原因么？

那on 前面的词的词形不用平行么? stress 是名词，其他adj?

thanks !

crossmoon

以下是引用pieyvonne在2005-8-4 16:42:00的发言：

谢谢版主 把问题都回答完了，十分感谢

不过最后一道题，我还是不明白，最后一题：it 代： 那个组织，是一个宾语从句，可以省略引导词，这样理解不行么？

envitontally 不是副词么？怎么修饰harm?

谢谢

sorry,这题我看得不仔细。你的理解是正确的，it 没有问题。envitontally harm这地方错了，要么换成：envitontally harmful; 要么换成 envitontal harm.

crossmoon

以下是引用pieyvonne在2005-8-4 21:30:00的发言：

还有一个问题：

The ballad is characterized by informal diction, by a narrative largely dependent on action and dialogue, by thematic intense,and by stress on repetition.

by thematic intense 改成 by thematic on intense?

是平行结构的原因么？

那on 前面的词的词形不用平行么? stress 是名词，其他adj?

thanks !

是平行结构，by thematic intense 改成 by thematic intensity。

stress是名词，其他并列的也是名词啊：diction，narrative，intense。

pieyvonne

如果改成：by thematic intensity ，没有 on,可以么？

pieyvonne

还有几个问题：

1. The modern detective story, in which a detective solves a crime by discovering and interpreting evidence, is considered to have originated with Edgar Allan Poe`s “the Murders in the Rue Morgue” in the 1984 . in 1984 , 为什么用 have originated ? 不用 originated ？

2. Henry David Thoreau was an American writer who is remembered for his faith in the religious significance of the nature.

who is remembered 可以么，不用时态统一？ of the nature 要改成 of nature ？

thanks!

pieyvonne

3.The first people to live in----- Hawaii were the polynesians, who sailed there in large canoes from other Pacific Islands about 2000 years ago.

now where is / what is now/ what now is 为什么what is now 对？ 其他那里错了？

vagrant

以下是引用pieyvonne在2005-8-5 11:23:00的发言：

如果改成：by thematic intensity ，没有 on,可以么？

有“on”反而就错了。这里表并列的介词是------by。

vagrant

以下是引用pieyvonne在2005-8-5 11:36:00的发言：

还有几个问题：

1. The modern detective story, in which a detective solves a crime by discovering and interpreting evidence, is considered to have originated with Edgar Allan Poe`s “the Murders in the Rue Morgue” in the 1984 . in 1984 , 为什么用 have originated ? 不用 originated ？

2. Henry David Thoreau was an American writer who is remembered for his faith in the religious significance of the nature.

who is remembered 可以么，不用时态统一？ of the nature 要改成 of nature ？

thanks!

1，用have originated 表示已经发生的状态

2，可以，不用时态统一。是的，改成of nature.

vagrant

以下是引用pieyvonne在2005-8-5 12:25:00的发言：

3.The first people to live in----- Hawaii were the polynesians, who sailed there in large canoes from other Pacific Islands about 2000 years ago.

now where is / what is now/ what now is 为什么what is now 对？ 其他那里错了？

正确答案就是：what is now

where一般用作副词，不用作代词

now应该靠近“现在的称呼”

pieyvonne

谢谢 vagrant

这里还有几个问题 嘿

1. The carbon-are lamp, a very bright electric lamp used for spotlight, consists of two carbon electrodes with a high - current are passing between it

It 改 them ? carbon-are 什么意思啊？

2．Some of species of milkweed are among the most dangerous of poisonous plants, while others have little, if any, toxicity. Of 不要可以么？

3. Water constitutes almost 96 percent of the body of weight of a jellyfish, so if a jellyfish were to dry out in the sun, it would virtually desappear. “were” 是虚拟么？ 都什么时候可以这么用？

thanks!