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issue 131

We can learn more about a society by obseving how its people spend their leisure time than by observing them at work.

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Just some rough ideas of mine!

Stance:
People's performance at workplace and their leisure activities are both reflective of a society.

1.Observing people at work helps us understand some very important aspects of our society.
For example,
(1)Whether or not we have competent and healthy working populace that contributes to the success of
businesses.
(2)How are the organizations structured? Are they typically hierarchy or horizontal?
(3)What level of ethic standards employees and executives hold in developing and promoting their products and services?

2.Observing people’s leisure activity can reveal the values, conventions, and other important aspects of a
society.
(1)The frequency of people going to museums, libraries and art centers etc. reflects the extent to which
people of a country are educated.
(2)By studying how people spend their leisure, we may also get to know what kind of a role religion plays in
their life.
(3)Even from how much time parents spend with their children after work and what influence they have on their children, we can predicate whether we will have a promising future generation.

Conclusion, both observing people at work and observing them at leisure time are essential ways for us to understand a society.


[此贴子已经被作者于2003-3-4 20:32:11编辑过]

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非常感谢gladys!!

你的思路太好了!!

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Joy,

You are very well-welcome!!!

Wish you the best of luck!!!

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狠狠批,体无完肤才好!!

我尝试着写这篇文章,好象就这几句话饶来饶去地说,没有更多的话了.征求宝贵意见!!谢谢!!

Recently there is a debate over whether we can learn more about the society by observing how its peoples spend their leisure time than by observing them at work. Different people hold different views from their distinct backgrounds. Some people claim that observing how its peoples spend their leisure time will help up understand the society, while other people assert that it is the more effective way to observe the work environment . As a matter of fact , the issue whether observing how people spend their leisure time will contribute to understand the society is a complex and controversial one, thus, actually the final judgment should rely on a case-by-case analysis. As far as I am concerned , I believe that we can learn more about the society by observing how its peoples spend their leisure time. My view can be greatly confirmed by the following discussion.

In the first place, the important reason that can be presented to develop my position is that how people spend their leisure time will reveal the culture of the society. To illustrate this point, let us see an example. Most of he citizens in Dalian City prefer to watching football game. When they are free , they often go to sports center to watch football game. In addition, when the important international football games or domestic football games held, they often gather at the TV and watch football games. Besides, there are many football superstars in Dalian. It is obvious that how the citizens of Dalian spend their leisure time reflects their social culture, that is their love for sports and their love for football.

In addition, there is another reason for me to choose this statement is that the performance at leisure time will reflect their social value. To illustrate this point, there is an example. In Fuzhou City, many adults would spend more time to accompany their children when they are free. They will accompany their children to go to the museums, the zoos, and sports center. In this way, we can predict their children will grow up into the promising generation . Thus, the citizens of Fuzhou are composed of love-bond families.

Admittedly, it may be true that observing people at time may learn something about the society in some conditions. However, this alone does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that we can learn more about the society by observing people at work. Actually, these cases are rare and therefore are too specific and too weak to strengthen the view that we can learn more about the society by observing people at work.. When the advantages and disadvantages of observing how people spend their leisure time and how people at work are carefully examined, the most striking conclusion is obvious that we can learn more about the society by observing how people spend their leisure time.

As I mentioned above, on the one hand, how people spend their leisure time will reveal the culture of the society . On the other hand, how people spend their leisure time will reflect their social value. Therefore, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that we can learn more about the society by observing how people spend their leisure time.

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写得很好啊,不错!
只不过,倒数第二段第一句是不是把at work写成at time了?
而且如果能再进一步表述为什么"these cases are rare and therefore are too specific and too weak"就好了,这一段有一点太仓促了,明显在回避什么.不过不是说这种让步的段子要写得很长,相反,笔墨要少些,但是一针见血.最简单的方法就是,说work不能像leisure time那样全面深刻的reflect society,因为各个社会工作上的区别太少了,工作方法越来越趋向于统一.这个意思一表述完整,这段就够了.
前面几段都写的很好

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to apan

你的意见太对了. 我马上修改. 但要在那么短的时间内,写出象样的文章,挺不容易的.
需要多多练习啊!

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是啊,不过我觉得你写的很不错的
我就总是写不出那么多字,呵呵

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