Tip 17 Make essay drafts as early as possible Normally, you will need to have a draft a month before you hand in the final version of your essays. However, the brainstorming for the draft could also be very time-consuming. In this stage, you should jot down your strengths and weaknesses, your team experiences, some achievements, etc.
Tip 18: Read sample essays and take notes Before my application, I had read about eighty MBA application essays. While reading, I kept my Excel spreadsheet open. Whenever I found a good phrases or a B-school lingo, I would "copy and paste" them to my spreadsheet. This learning process is beneficial in both idea and phrase collection. When revising my plain MBA application essay drafts, I also kept my spreadsheet open and "copied and pasted" those phrases (Warning: not sentence and paragraphs; otherwise, it would be considered as "plagiarism", see Tip 20) to my essays and makes them integral but shining parts of my essays.
Tip 19: Find some advisors/proofreaders I passed my essay drafts to the following group of people for their critique: 4 colleagues, 3 classmates, 2 MBA students, 2 friends in Wall Street, 2 English teachers. All of them had fluent English and most of them had similar experiences as I did. They offered valuable comments and suggestions to me from different perspectives, which substantially helped to sharpen my essays.
Tip 20: Tailor-made your essay Two common mistakes many applicants make are plagiarizing and using general version of application essays! Remember, the officials in B-schools are not idiots. They may easily sense trails of plagiarism or proxies in the essays from mismatched tones, fragmented contents, and their previous readings. Also, they can tell whether an essay is tailor-made or simply generated by changing school names in a common template The only shortcuts are those mentioned elsewhere in this section.
Tip 21: Strategy differentiation You may take the risk to write some "weird" essays to top-10s. A plain essay will do nothing but to bore those already exhausted school officials. On the other hand, the 2nd-tiers and 3rd-tiers schools are where conservatism rules. Your experience and your GMAT scores have already proved your achievements. They are eager to give you the offer to increase their average GMAT scores and diversify their student body. In this connection, an essay illustrating your work experience and your motivations well will leave them deep impression. It is simply not worthwhile taking the risk to write "weirdly".
Tip 22: Be specific Judgment is a critical characteristic for an MBA applicant. Unfortunately, I myself devoutly read a lot of pointless essays instead of tossing them into my garbage can. It is strange that many essays full of bullshits are highly recommended by some greedy publishers. What we have seen in these essays are: "Born in 19XX in ABC city, DEF province..." "I am creative, energetic and diligent." Blah, blah, blah.... I bet the admission officials have to turn up the volume of their **-players, drink several cups of coffee, and watch dirty talk-show programs at the same time to keep themselves awake while reading these essays. Please show them specific events, situations that can be visualized, vivid illustrations to spark their interests in you.
Tip 23: Be confident I think . has a very good article demonstrating the importance of confidence. Please refer to Confidence, GRE, and Visa Sorry, Jinbo, I did a lot of reference here. It is true that I am quite lazy these days. But this does not mean that confidence is a factor I do not care. Rather, if I were to choose only one tip from my article, I'd recommend this one. As a matter of fact, self-confidence is the only tip that is applicable and critical to every application process. Even in B-school, we are trained to be 100% self-confident even if we are actually dummies in certain areas. |