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请教两道OG语法问题。

请问两道OG语法题目.

77. Though the term "graphic design" may suggest laying out corporate brochures and annual reports, they have come to signify widely ranging work, from package designs and company logotypes to signs, book jackets, computer graphics, and film titles.
(A)        suggest laying out corporate brochures and annual reports, they have come to signify widely ranging
(B)        suggest laying out corporate brochures and annual reports, it has come to signify a wide range of
(C)        suggest corporate brochure and annual report layout, it has signified widely ranging
(D)        have suggested corporate brochure and annual report layout, it has signified a wide range of
(E)        have suggested laying out corporate brochures and annual reports, they have come to signify widely ranging
Choice A contains an agreement error: the term requires the singular it has in place of the plural they have. Furthermore, widely ranging is imprecise: graphic design work does not range about widely but rather comprises a wide range of activities. Choice C contains widely ranging and, like D, fails to use a verb form such as laying out to define the activities, instead presenting an awkward noun phrase: corporate brochure and annual report layout. The present perfect tense is used inappropriately in choices C (has signified), D (have suggested... has signified), and E (have suggested) to indicate recently completed rather than ongoing action. Additionally, E contains the incorrect they have and the imprecise widely ranging. Choice B is best.

请问为什么D不行呢? term...suggest...layout看着不错哦

220. For almost a hundred years after having its beginning in 1788, England exiled some 160,000 criminals to Australia.
(A)        For almost a hundred years after having its beginning in 1788,
(B)        Beginning in 1788 for a period of a hundred years,
(C)        Beginning a period of almost a hundred years, in 1788
(D)        During a hundred years, a period beginning in 1788,
(E)        Over a period of a hundred years beginning in 1788,
Aside from being wordy and awkward, choice A is illogical: because its refers grammatically to England, A states nonsensically that England had its beginning in 1788. Choice B is similarly illogical, because the initial verb phrase Beginning in 1788 ... modifies England, the subject of the main clause. Choice C is imprecise, saying that England in 1788 was Beginning a period... but not conveying the sense that anything happened within that period. Choice D is awkward and unidiomatic, and nonsensically suggests that a hundred years is defined as a period beginning in 1788. Precise and idiomatically phrased, choice E is best.

为什么D不对? “nonsensically suggests that a hundred years is defined as a period beginning in 1788”是什么意思??

谢谢了!!
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77 D中come to 不能省略,否则就改变了原意,而且suggest用完成时不妥,她在文中表示的是一种状态

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77、请看qiufeng1990前面发的讨论帖子,里面有多人意见。
220、D用a period beginning in 1788做了a hundred years的同位语,起到限定100年的作用。若所有的100年都是开始于1788年,不是很荒谬吗?
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谢谢版主,不过我还有一个疑问,对于正确答案E, 它和D有什么区别呢? E中的beginnign 是修饰 period 还是 a hundred year?

另外如果把D中的 a hundred year 改为 the hundred year, 是不是就对了呢?

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It's still not grammatical to use 'the hundred years'...

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77 my point of view:
"sth may suggest....., it has come to signify....." is better than "....., it has signified"
the former means: graphic design 可能是指.....现在它已经用来指.....
while the latter means: graphic design 可能是指.....它已经表示了......
前者平行性较好,而后者强调了动作的完成,不符合原句的意思

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