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parispings

At the annual stockholders meeting, investors heard a presentation on the numerous challenges facing the company, including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for the company’s powerful microprocessor chip.

A. including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for

B. which includes the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of

C. included among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit as well as a decline in sales for

D. among them the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of

E. among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit as well as the decline in sales for

D is correct. 请问“主句，介词+代词+名词"是什么结构？后面有谓语的省略么?

EGHJUYMN

倒装形式的独立主格结构

实际上是the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of the company’s powerful microprocessor chip among them,倒装可以避免头重脚轻

sbjqbS

请问B为什么错呢？是因为which只可就近指代company而不可指代challenges吗？谢谢~

gmatmba

B. which includes the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of
includes单三，使which不能指代复数名词challenges

zhangluE

D 难道不是犯了双重所有格的错误么？

stucashS

A错哪里呢？

卮言浅夏

A: including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for
including是介词，among也是介词，这里的两个介词连用错。。
没有sale for，只有sale of或是for sale

sbjqbS

including 和 among 是不是语意重复了啊

zongzeng90

倒装形式的独立主格结构

实际上是the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement s ...
EGHJUYMN 发表于 2010-9-6 21:03

    顶！火眼金星啊！
"sales for" is unidiomatic.
"declining sales of" and "decline in sales of" are both correct, but PARALLELISM requires the latter.