求教一道模考题

teddyabc

In the admissions process, universities have begun to focus more and more on recommendations from teachers and personal statements from students, (in part that their student body should acquire diversity) and partly because recommendations provide more personal appraisals of students' abilities.

A. in part that their student body should acquire diversity

B. in part for the acquisition of diversity in their student body

C. partly because of their student body acquiring diversity

D. partly because diversity should be acquired by their student body

E. partly to acquire diversity in their student body

答案是E，
本人选的是D。
原文后面and partly because+句子，那既然要求平行对称的话也应该要求partly because+句子啊，为什么选E？不懂啊~

teddyabc

哦好吧，原来是这样,谢谢!

mudiduanger

你看and partly because后面是recommendations，D选项的主语是diversity。这两个是不能并列的。一个是Concrete noun，另一个是Action noun。是绝对性错误。to acquire diversity可以勉强算做Action noun一类。所以E正确。不过这个句子有很多错误的地方，只要看看就好吧~希望对你有帮助哈