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SY_AI_1:

Recently there is a debate over whether television and radio programs
are carefully censored for offensive language and behavior.In fact,the
issue of whether televison and radio programs are carefully censored
for offensive language and behavior is complex and controverial one.
Different pepole hold different views due to their distinct angles.On
the one hand,some people assert that television and radion programs
should be censored for offensive language and behavior.On the other
hand,other people believe that there should be little or no censorship.
In following discussion,I would like to reason and provide eveidence
favoring the former one and refuting latter one.

In the first place,an important reason that can be presented to develop
my position is that offensive language and behavior can be harmful to
young people.Because children or young people do not know what is benifit
for them and what is harmful to them,offensive language and behavior,such
as porn or violent publication,will threaten to the growth of young people.
Therefore,it is necessary to censor television and radio programs for
offsensive language and behavior.

In the second place,an another reason for me to choose the former one and
refute latter one is that offensive language and behavior can be a damage
to national safety and stability.For example,most of offensive language and
behavior often attack the system of nation or threaten to social morale.
if people of nation are impacted by such offensive language and behavior,it
will enable nation to become unsafe or be splited.Under this condition,it is
obvious that television and radio programs are carefully censored for offensive
language and behavior.

Although It may be true that there should be little or no such censorship
in some condition.However,the freedom of speaking and behavior can not be
harmful to nation and people of this contry.

Consequently,I advocate that television and radio programs should be
carefully censored for offensive language and behavior,because (1)offensive
language and behavior can be harmful to young people;(2)offensive language
and behavior can be a damage to nation safety and stability.Due to the above-
mentioned reasons,which sometimes interwine to form logical whole and thus
become more persuasive,we may comfortablly arrive at the conclusion I support.
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比我那5分的作文好多多....了.  分数你就可以自己给了

不用担心AWA, 它是性价比最高的ETS产品..

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