prep1-18

billsq

Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.

(A) were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
(B) influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
(C) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to
(D) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to(E) were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of

billsq

有什么不可以的，also是副词，跟动词在一起没任何问题，去掉也行的！只是这里想表达也的意味就加上了.
angelsgx 发表于 2011-6-26 20:30

如果 2个动词是在一个句子里的，再这么表示的话 就是错的了吧？不过我怎么读都像是在一个句子里的意思⋯⋯

angelsgx

有什么不可以的，also是副词，跟动词在一起没任何问题，去掉也行的！只是这里想表达也的意味就加上了.

billsq

inspired前面有个also，意思不就是XXX influenced XXX, 还 inspired XX吗？

billsq

BM的三样东西（reperty, views, and vocal style) influenced...这里的influenced是从句的谓语；also inspi ...
angelsgx 发表于 2011-6-24 06:45

    那结构就成了BM后面直接跟的also了阿？

angelsgx

BM的三样东西（reperty, views, and vocal style) influenced...这里的influenced是从句的谓语；also inspired...中的inspired是主句的谓语。

billsq

不知道为什么编辑不了。。。选b,问题是influenced 和inspired是平行的，但可以同时存在一个句子里吗？不用加and?