OG12 105 看了答案也搞不懂

linbingcheng

105. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on
her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating
them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully
coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix
Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinated them with her narratives and

答案是C
为什么E不对？

michellehoS

them出现的太不像话。

GMAT语法里出现them要没有合理的必须要用的感觉直接掠过不看。

steinlala

E动作间的关系不对，或说是动作间的逻辑不对。coordinate与capitalize不是平行对等发生的一组动作，A选项表达的也不是这个意思。Coordinate是修饰性从句或分词里的动作，不在主句里。

buttonwood

同意楼上~~~
coordinated和capitalized用and平行了起来，可以共同做定语就近修饰illustrations，也可以共同作谓语修饰主语Beatrix Potter，所以还是很不清楚到底修饰什么。