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【练习题GWD-24-38】
In January 1994 an oil barge ran aground off the coast of San Juan, Puerto Rico, leaking its cargo of 750,000 gallons into the ocean, while causing the pollution of the city's beaches.
A. leaking its cargo of 750,000 gallons into the ocean, while causing the pollution of
B. with its cargo of 750,000 gallons leaking into the ocean, and it polluted
C. and its cargo of 750,000 gallons leaked into the ocean, polluting
D. while it leaked its cargo of 750,000 gallons into the ocean and caused the pollution of
E. so that its cargo of 750,000 gallons leaked into the ocean, and they were polluting
解析
A. leaking作为ran aground off的结果状语不如并列合理(ran aground了不一定leaking);while causing中暗指被省略的causing的主语是barge,逻辑错误,而且用while来连接causing和前面分句的关系不合理(不管是引导时状、还是转折、还是让步、还是条件);causing the pollution不如直接polluting做结果状语表达有效;
B. and后面的it指代barge错误,barge不能造成污染,而是撞击并泄露的事才造成污染,所以and两边的逻辑并列关系不成立。
C. Correct。
D. it leaked its cargo of 750,000 gallons表达累赘;caused的动作发者是barge逻辑上不合理,应该是泄漏这件事情导致;用while来表达前后分句的逻辑关系错误;caused the pollution of不简洁。
E. they只能指代前面唯一的复数gallons,但gallons只是一个单位,无法导致污染,逻辑含义错误(亦可解释为they无所指);且so that前不应有逗号,而且its cargo of 750,000 gallons leaked into the ocean并不是an oil barge ran aground off the coast of San Juan的必然结果,所以逻辑上用so that连接不合适。 |
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