7月5日换题库了——7月GMAT作文新题汇总AA(33-35题)

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33. AA:说的是有一个服装品牌面向的客户主要是年轻人，原来这个品牌都在一些折扣店里经营。最近这个品牌决定在全国开设自己的专卖店，评论认为将会取得很好的销量因为这个品牌的CEO曾经是一个rock star

感谢davidpan86

没有原题，考古

V1. Crow’s head company什么的
五年前衣服销量不错
打算再开125家分店什么的。。然后说顾客一定会买因为他们的CEO是rock star 然后有个management team pursue expansion 还有个原因。。失忆了。。。。

我用的是过去推现在，无理假设

V2. 说一个clothes的company 在前4年销售很不错，所以计划自己新开 125retail store，
自己管理，然后说因为顾客会感觉到公司在expansion 所以会来买，而且ceo of this company is a former rock star，所以相信这个计划会成功。

攻击点比较清楚：

1 连续5年增长和retail outlets 不代表是hot trend.

2 开125家店需要大量投资，现金风险太大，能否收回投资完全没把握。

3 former的rock star 是否仍然受欢迎。而且公司目标群是youth，以前的fans都会变大，不再年轻。

提供观点：

1、过去5年盈利不保证将来也会盈利，新的销售渠道的建立（改变销售渠道）可能会对销量产生负面影响

2、不充分：有实力管理激进不能推断出股东能获利

3、前摇滚明星有知名度有粉丝，但管理好公司还需要专业的CEO

4、前摇滚明星不能保证在未来的一代青年人中一直保持高知名度

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34. No.61 The following appeared in the letters-to-the-editor section of a local newspaper.
“Muscle Monthly, a fitness magazine that regularly features pictures of bodybuilders using state-of-the-art exercise machines, frequently sells out, according to the owner of Skyview Newsstand. To help maximize fitness levels in our town’s residents, we should, therefore, equip our new community fitness center with such machines.”
61. 本地报纸上给编者的信板块：
一份叫Muscle Monthly的健康杂志规律性地刊登使用最好的训练器械的健美运动员的照片。据skyview报摊的摊主说它经常卖完。为了提高我镇居民的健康水平，我们应该给我们的新健身中心装备这样的器械。
提供观点：
1、        如果杂志卖光得快不一定是因为这个器材好，很可能是价钱便宜，和其他的内容。
2、        那些人很可能并不真正用这些机器，而只是摆出造型。
3、        如果是为了body-building的机器很可能不能fitness。比如，cardiovascular fitness。
1、        The bodybuilders may just pretend to be using the state-of-the-art exercise machines while, in fact, their excellent body conditions are due to the use of other types of equipment. And, they just do so for the advertisement purpose.
2、        The circulation is just one of the indicators of the popularity of the magazine. What is more, I can find no direct relationship between the popularity of the magazine and the author's suggestion that we should equip the community with the state-of-the-art excercise machine.
3、        The machines for body building will not necessarily have the same effect on fitness.

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下面例文来自北美范文
In this argument the author concludes that the new community fitness center should be equipped with the state-of-the-art exercise machines featured in Muscle Monthly magazine. In support of this recommendation two reasons are offered: (1) Muscle Monthly contains pictures of bodybuilders using such machines, and (2) Muscle Monthly is a popular magazine, as evidenced by the fact that it frequently sells out at the local newsstand. This argument is questionable on two counts.
First, a major implication of the argument is that the bodybuilders pictured using the machines in Muscle Monthly magazine reached their state of fitness as a result of using these machines. The only evidence offered to support this contention, however, is the pictures in the magazine. It is possible that the bodybuilders pictured use different equipment for their workouts and are merely posing with the machines for advertising purposes.
Second, the author assumes that machines that are suitable for bodybuilding will also be suitable to help maximize the fitness levels of the town’s residents. This assumption is highly questionable. Machines designed to increase muscle development are significantly different from those designed to increase cardiovascular fitness. Consequently, it is unlikely that the machines pictured in the magazine will be of much use to help maximize the fitness levels of the town’s residents.
In conclusion, this argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the author would have to show that the bodybuilders pictured using the exercise machines actually used the machines to reach their level of muscle development. Additionally, the author would have to show that the machines were suitable for increasing the fitness levels of the persons using them.

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35. The country of Bonaria held a major soccer event five years ago. Therefore, if the country continues to hold major sport events, tourism will increase rapidly in the country and thus bring benefits to the country's economy.
某个国家5年前办了场运动会，然后发现近三年旅游人数增多鸟，经济都增长了。所以有人提出为了促进经济增长，要再办个国际赛事。
考古V2. 某个旅游城市的旅游局长的提议 - 在五年前我市举行了一个著名的足球赛，在赛后的三年里游客人数比赛前三年增加了25%，因此我们应该再举行一场国际大赛，从而拉动我们的旅游业发展和经济发展。
提供观点：
1、错误的由时间先后推出因果关系
2、过去的成功不能保证将来，存在他因