AWA5.0感想，GMAT考试作文经验分享

fifthstreet

刚刚查了电子成绩，AWA5.0，有点shock，意外。现在总结一下我的复习经历供参考AWA难度，希望对和我背景相似的xdjm们有帮助～
背景：
GRE AW 3.0（这是个彻底的悲剧><）
T 作文单项 24 （综合写作悲剧><)
复习：考前一天
a.找了某6.0大N的A魔版+6G自己准备的魔版，拿来反复记忆；
b.晚上看了狗狗I&A各约15道左右（此时感觉A都能找到3个错，I都能扯3个点，再一看还有N多狗狗等着我，于是自我安慰说OK了，就这样上场吧……）；
c.仔细研读了黄金80篇的几篇范文，感觉比GRE的I简单，字数更少，逻辑更简单，深度也低些，于是我放宽了心态，暗道，KAO，总不会比6G的3.0更鹾了吧……；
d.没有练过一篇，因为只有十来天复习，AWA被我无情地舍弃了::><::；
考试ing:
a.进去得比较早，旁边的某姐键盘敲得巨fast, 心一颤手就有点抖了，总是少打或多打字母，很是郁闷。。。
b.我深深的记得A打完第一段已经过去10min了……当时死的心都有了，为毛我考前没有在电脑上敲下魔版啊
c.自我感觉，A&I的字数两篇我差不多，估计400出头，所以最后成绩5.0挺shock的（考前问前辈都跟我说500……当时我就黯然了，考T 的时候，我独立写作觉得打得神速也只有450/30min, 这个要500/30min??!! 哈搞笑滴吧::><:
呵呵，以上是我的AWA总结，似乎鸡马特的AWA比较简单？至少在我的6G的AW vs. AWA上来看是这样。
以此总结希望对没有啥时间复习AWA，背景和我相似的xdjm有帮助呵～～祝考试大吉！！

放上我用的某大N的魔版~觉得是我见过的最后滴
请见http://forum.topway.org/viewthread.php?tid=219843&extra=

piggy_l

good

allygmat7

many    thanks (***(*)(()(()

bobochener

many  thanks @2

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In conclusion, issue of ____________is a complex one, requiring subjective judgment, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers. So different are the personal experiences and emotional concerns among people with diverse culture that thousand individuals might hold thousand opinions. According to me,   把你开头的观点copy/paste上去.

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On the other hand, recognizing that a more applicable choice must incorporate different aspects of the issue as sufficient as possible, I have to point out that the author overstates ______’s comparative significance, and fail to take into account other essential factors. In short, this assertion is problematic in two aspects. The first argument —the one that I think the most compelling— is that the author overlooked             , that is to say,           . The second argument —it might have been noticed by others-- is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to           . Accordingly, I tend to concede that when it comes to some certain circumstances it is partially appropriate

（这里找两个理由说明在一些场合下，作者观点还是不成立的，因为不管什么论点，成立还是会有条件的。此段模版字数已经很多，你只要列出不成立的观点即可，言简意赅，因为一般到这个时候，时间也不多了，容不得你写例子了。）

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Issue

把题目复述一下      ? To some extent, I agree with the author’s general assertion that    if *** (即在作者的观点上，加上一些条件，有保留地赞同). However, the author unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks other compelling factors that may affect this issue. On balance, my points of agreement and contention with the author involve the fundamental and deep analysis as discussed below.

On the one hand, I would like to admit that this statement, although suffers from some obvious drawbacks, has some merits primarily in some special cases in which the implicit rationale behind it accords with common sense and our experience in daily life. Hence, it is partially indisputable. After all, …..Even if,       In other words       .

Furthermore,           . All these evidence demonstrates beyond any doubt that_____.

（以上两段要找两个理由，来说明作者观点如何对）

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不随时变攻击Moreover, the author unfairly assumes that A will remain unchanged over the next decades. However, a mere recent one-year A is insufficient to claim that. Statistics from such limited anecdotal evidence is not a good indicator for this trend. In addition, it is possible that in the future, this trend would greatly fluctuate or even reverse, then the adoption of the author’s proposal might give birth to B, however, it might also have a negative impact on C1 and, in turns, C2. Admittedly, this argument would be even weaker and weaker each day as time goes by.

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差异概念攻击To begin with, we must establish the meaning of the vague concept A. If the term were synonymous with B, the evidence cited would strongly support the argument. However, A may be defined in other terms such as C and D. Accordingly, the author has drawn the conclusion too hastily due to the ignorance of other definitions of A.

范围内推攻击 What’s more, the most egregious reasoning error in this argument is that the author uses evidence pertaining to a general group on the basis of a particular B. Even if the reasoning may be sound in general sense, the particular situation in which B is involved may not be representative of the entire general group. It is possible that... If this is the case, the claim that… is ill founded.

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Loaded question和诚实性攻击  What’s more, the methodology of the survey is problematic for two reasons. For one thing, we are not informed whether the survey provided only 3 alternatives. If it did, the respondents, who might very well prefer another choice not provided in the survey, might be forced to give up their preferences. For another thing, we are not informed whether the survey responses were anonymous or confidential. The respondents might supply responses favored by their superiors who might conduct the survey. Both events would lead this survey unreliable, let alone draw the conclusion that…

样本时效性攻击Last but not least, another flaw that significantly undermines this argument is that the author neglects to indicate how recently the survey was actually conducted. When used to generally claim a particular group, the samples should be close enough to support the generalization, in order to prevent historical changes from invalidating the generalization. All we know is that the survey is recently published. The less recent the survey itself, the less reliable the results to demonstrate that…