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看到大家对模版这么感兴趣,我把我这几个月搜集的模版全都贴上来,大家各取所需吧!
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awa模板

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mba8.com 2002-03-25 13:15:07

Argument结尾模板

模板一
In conclusion, this argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument, the author would have to show that .
Moreover, . To better evaluate this argument, we would also have to know .

模板二
Since the author commits the above mentioned logical mistakes and fails to consider the whole situation comprehensively, his idea should not be adopted. If he wishes his idea to be of any value, he has to take the following condition into consideration: .

模板三
In conclusion, the author provides an incomplete analysis of the problem and, as a result, provides a questionable solution. To better the argument, the author would have to show that . To better evaluate this argument, we should .

模板四
With some essential information still in absence, there is no ground to support the conclusion. Therefore, it is questionable whether .

模板五
In conclusion, the persuasiveness of the argument made by the author is undermined by the lack of fairness in the reasoning that .


模板五
In an attempt to , the article claims that . The evidence cited is that . Additionally, the author points out that . This argument is unconvincing because several questionable assumptions must be made for the stated evidence to support the author’s conclusion.

模板六
The survey that indicates lead the author to predict that . Moreover, the author argues that .
This argument is problematic in three important respects.

模板七
The conclusion of this argument is that .The author employs several lines of reasoning to reach this conclusion. In the first, the author reasons that . In the second, the author points out that . This argument is problematic for a couple of reasons.

模板八
The speaker proposes that . Two reasons are offered in support of this argument. First, . Second,
. The argument is unfounded because the speaker oversimplifies the problem and its solutions.

模板九
Based upon a correlation between A and B , the author argues that . The author further argues that .
The author’s reasoning is unconvincing, since it suffers from two critical problems.


模板十
According to this newspaper article, .
The author supports this claim by pointing out that . Furthermore, the author reasons that . Despite these impressive statistics, I am unconvinced by this argument for two reasons.

概括性陈述题模板：
一： 反对

The speaker here asserts/maintain/consider that . However, I disagree with the speaker for some obvious reasons.

One of the reason why I have such a view is (原因一 ) .To illustrate this point, there is an example that is very persuasive: （举例）.

Secondly, from a practical point of view,
(原因二). We can see that .（举例）

Admittedly, 作者的观点也有什么优点. However, its disadvantages certainly outweigh its advantages.

In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that .


二： 同意

The discussion of the issue among individuals and in society as a whole has come into vogue during the speaker and there are many instances supporting my view.

To begin with, . There is a good example to show that .

Further support can be found in the case that . If you see that , you can understand it more deeply.

The third and very important reason is that . For instance, .
In conclusion, it must be explained that these three reasons sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any one of them. So, any thinking person must believe that .



三： 反对

Contrary to the speaker’s statement, my view is that . My position well supported by common sense and by observation.

Regarding the first reason, .

There is a good example to show it: . Furthermore, .

As for the second reason, .
For instance, .

Moreover, . Admittedly, .

Based on the above analysis, I disagree with the opinion that .

补充:写作用词
支持:
support
bolster
endorse
uphold
fortify
concord
corroborate
countenance
reinforce
strengthen
enhance
sustain
反对:
disapprove
dissent
oppose
condemn
dispute
resist
impugn
counter
controvert
antagonistic
combat
gainsay


两者比较题模板：
一：
Which is better: A or B ? Different people have different answers due to their respective point of view. However, I shall agree that B is better than A, for the reasons addressed below.

To begin with, . In order to see this point clearly, let us see an example: .

Second, . For example, .

Third, . The reason for this is that .

In conclusion, due to the above-mentioned reasons, I believe that .

模板二：

This controversy describes the dilemma faced by many people in this era. As far as I am concerned, I support B, because there are too many benefits that outnumber its disadvantages not to support it.

There are numerous reasons why I support B. And I will in here explain a few of the most import ones. The main reason is that . For example, .

A further reason why I support B is that . There is a good example to show that .

A on the other hand, also has some benefits, such as . But its advantages are no more than its disadvantages. We can see this clearly in a case that .

From the above discussion, we see that even though the dilemma still exits, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that .

两者比较题模板三：
The issue of whether to choose A or choose B is a complex one, since it involves a conflict between . The choice, nevertheless, is not easy to make. In my view, the final judgment should depend on a case-by-case analysis of the two situations.

A is very important under some circumstance, for example, .
On the other hand, .

B is sometimes important as well. We can see that . On the other hand, .

In sum, decision should be made an a case-by-case basis, .


是否选择题模板
一：
Whether AAA should or should not be done is a hot debated problem in that it affects everybody in his daily lives. Careful consideration leads me to believe that .

First of all, I believe that .
A small example could give some light to this point. It is said that .

Secondly, I believe that .
Sometimes, for example, .

Last but not least, .
As we know, .

In conclusion, it is my opinion that .

是否选择题模板
二：
Determining whether AAA should or should not be done could be weighed in many aspects. On balance, my view is that AAA should not be done in modern society.

First, it goes without saying that .
In order to see this point clearly, let us see an example: .

Second, . A case in point is that .

Finally, . For example, .

So, based on the above discussion, it is not difficult to get the conclusion: .


因果关系：
一：
To begin with, the author’s line of reasoning is that A was the cause of B. However, although A coincided with B, it does not establish a general causal relationship between A and B. For example, it is quite possible that . Thus, .(结论错误)

二：(它因)
This article concludes that . Very likely and but not necessarily, other factors such as (其他因素) are ignored as possible causes for B. The argument can be sustained only if these and other possible factors can be completely ruled out as contributing to B.

三：（两事根本没因果关系）
The argument commits the fallacy of assuming that just because one event follows another, the second event has been caused by the first. The mere fact that A occurs before B does not necessarily establish a causal relationship between A and B.

另一种表述：
To begin with, this argument is a classic instance of “after this, therefore because of this” reasoning. The mere fact that A preceded B is insufficient to conclude that A was the cause of B. Many other factors could bring about these same results. For example, （一个他因）. In addition, (另一个他因).


无证明的假设：
一
Second, the author assumes that B was caused by A. However, no evidence has been given to substantiate this assumption. It is also possible that other factors might contribute to the B. For instance, . So, the author’s failure to consider and rule out other possible factors that might influence the result renders this argument suspects.

二：
To begin with, the argument depends on the assumption that . however, the author provides no evidence that this is the case. It is possible that .

类比关系：
if it works for A, it will work for B.

In the first place, the argument depends upon a misleading comparison between A and B. A .（A的情况） On the other hand, B .(B的情况)

另一种表述：
These two businesses are too dissimilar for meaningful comparison.
The author assumes that what is true of A will likewise be true of B. But there are all kinds of important differences between A and B. We cannot safely assume that .

时间上的前后 两年前，两年后时间的跨度 一个星期够不够长

整体和局部：整体会增加，不一定每部分增加

作文模板


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考的很差，但考前只是写过一篇Issue的我，轻松搞惦，模板的作用是显然的，综合了许多先人的经验：）
Issue
开头：
There is much controversy over the issue of…/whether…
The arguer advocates that…, probably, while others insist that…
We do not have to look very far to see the valid standpoint of this matter.
In the following analysis, I would like to reason and provide evidence to validate the former one and refute the latter one//to support the view that….
正文：
In the first place, the important reason in support of my view is that…。
In the second place, Sth is a case in point. As we know,
Admittedly, there is no denying that…。However, this is too weak to strengthen the view that…
结尾：
To sum up, while…..may be true in exceptional cases, I agree that…

Argument
开头：
In this argument ( editorial) the author concludes that ….
The conclusion is based on（the result of a survey；several facts；the example of）…In addition, the arguer asserts that…We do not have to look very far to see the validity of this reasoning. While this argument is somewhat convincing, several important respects need to be addressed.
Presumably, the arguer who reaches this conclusion reasons that…We do not have to look very far to see the validity of this argument. This line of reasoning is problematic in two important respects.
正文：
In the first place,… In the second place,… Finally,…
结尾：
In conclusion, this arguer fails to substantiate its claim that…because the evidences cited in the analysis doesn’t lend strong support to what the arguer claims. To strengthen the argument, the arguer must convince us that…In addition, the arguer would have to provide more precise information to support its claim.




be international in scope short term motive self-interest
performance of a company causal connection

factors typically play just as virtal a role in the untimate success or failure of a business
…is one way to. But it is not the only way, nor the best way.


The arguer unfairly assumes that…But there are many other possible factors that might account for…
Without consider other factors that contribute to…, the arguer cannot justify its…
The arguer focuses only on the negative effect that…A more details analysis of the situation might reveal that…
The stastics cited in the argument may be misleading because the total number of… is not specified.
The respondents’ view may be not necessarily representative of the view of…in general. Thereby distort the overall picture of…
Whether the respondents account for significant and representative portion of…is deadly important.
The arguer makes a hasty generalization/false analogy/fallacy”after this, therefore because of this” about…
It accords with common sense that…

The line of reasoning is that… This is fallacious reasoning unless other possible causal explanations have been considered or ruled out.





V19的作文摸版


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V19的作文摸版

两次都拿了5.5分，即使g友们不说，也打算自动来贴摸版的（其实是前面大牛的摸版七拼八凑的，别见笑呀！）

Issue

The issue of whether… is a complex and controversial one. Different people hold different views due to their respective angles. In my opinion, however, I agree that … do not agree that…. My view will be greatly confirmed by the following discussion.

The first argument that can be presented to develop my position is that … A good example may be found in the case that… Under this circumstance/ therefore, it is obvious that…

In addition, there is another reason for me to choose this statement. / consider this statement to be wrong. The reason is not far to seek:…
To illustrate, let us consider that … Hence, another equally important aspect is that…

Admittedly, it may be true that… in some conditions. However, this alone does not constitute a sufficient support to …, When the advantage and disadvantage of X and Y are carefully compared, the most striking conclusion is obvious.

Consequently, due to the above-mentioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine to FORM an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that…, because…

Argument:

In this argument, the author concludes that.. To support his conclusion, the author points out that… In addition, he reasons that… This argument is unconvincing for several reasons.(第二次考时v19把这句观点句给忘了，不知为什么还得5。5分)

In the first place, ….

In the second place,…

Finally,…

Since the author commits the above mentioned logical mistakes and fails to consider the whole situation comprehensively, his ideas should not be adopted. The conclusion would be strengthened if he
(注， argument 的摸版很灵活，推荐AA的七宗罪)

再罗嗦两句，个人意见，考场上尽可能罗嗦，能用两句话别用一句话，不怕重复（别听孙员的鬼话，考场上没时间想换一个词表达同一个意思），不用背例子（v19一个也没背），issue最好有反驳的那点，argument最好有第三点，哪怕两句话。还有末段原因的总结，别忘了使用粘贴功能呀！



作文5.5分模板, 作者：sharronz

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issue:
开头段：
第一句话(两厢比较型中则是第一组话)：
A.单一观点型(看场合不同选择一个)
1.As is well-known and has often been described, ...
2.It is traditionally a common practice for...
B.两厢比较型
There is much debate over the issue that... Some people believe that... Others, however, maintain that...

第二句话：
A.单一观点（简称单）
1.支持：In my point of view, I agree with the speaker and there are many instances supporting my view.
2.反对：In my point of view, I do not agree with the opinion stated above for some obvious reasons.
B.两厢比较（简称两）
In my point of view, whether one has advantages over the other depends on the specific circumstances.

第二段：
In the first place, the reason why I have such a view is that...
A particular example for this is ...
Under this circumstance, it is obvious that...

第三段：
In the second place, much evidence has shown that ...
Just imagine what would be like if...
Hence, another equally important aspect is that...

第四段：
Finally, to understand the truth of ..., it is also necessary to see...
For example, ...

总结段：
Consequently, due to the above-mentioned reasons, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that...

argument
开头段：
In this argument, the arguer concludes/recommends that...
To support this conclusion, the arguer points out/provides evidence that...
In addition, he reasons/asserts/infers that...
Furthermore, he also indicates that...
But in my point of view, this argument suffers from three(2,4,5都可以啦) critical flaws.

第二段：
In the first place, the arguer rests on the unreasonable / gratuitous/ unconvincing assumption that...
However, the author provides no evidence to support this argument.
It is likely that.... yet the reason is still insufficient.
...

第三段：
In the second place,
1.the arguer fails to establish the causal relationship between ... and ...
2.the arguer commits a fallacy of causal oversimplification.
3.the arguer cites the fact/assumes that... This fact(assumption), however, does not seem convincing/reasonable on its face.
(按需要选用3句中的一句)
...

第四段：
Last but not least(字典上是这样说的，但是我考试时写了the last but not the least,不知道是对还是错)，
1.the arguer fails to take into account other facts that contribute to...
2.he statistic evidence on which the argument relies is too vague to be believable.
...

总结段：
To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the arguer claims. To make the argument more convincing, the arguer would have to provide more information that...
The arguer should also demonstrate that...to make this argument logically acceptable.

好了，真的是我全部家当，我就是用它们考试的，记住，除了模板，别的字数也要凑够。
另外有时我写了在几个句子中选一个，实际上考试时我是先选了一项写，后来检查时发现这段比较短，不太好看，就再用第二句作为这一段分论点的一个次分论点，然后用一句话的小例子甚至同义反复的方法凑到比较工整。应该也是有用的。
detto教的方法也很好使，就是在考试开始前把模板背诵到草稿纸上，开始写作文时就不用一边回忆一边写了，可以直接做输入。
如果有空，也可多想点万能例子（800score曾有一份整理好的例子集，才思枯竭的考友建议参考），经济类的issue不用怕，最难的是什么建筑，艺术和社会的话题，这时要记一下孙远的提纲，不过我又想起来有关这个话题（建筑代表了一个时代的什么什么，记不清了）


bucks無差別AWA心法體會

作者：bucks 发表于：2002-03-27 14:16:34
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呵呵
AWA成績來也，沒有意外，一如預期，五分
如果就這五分單獨而言，當然不能算是令人滿意的成績
從「收獲/付出」的價性比來看，則實在令人滿意

經驗分享6分寫作牛人略過不看，以免浪費時間)

準備:
1.考前共寫三篇練習，大約只能寫280-300字左右，共一小時
2.AWA題目二小時全部瀏覽完畢
3.依老哥及新概念句型，自創言不及義通用template，二小時
4.再依template寫一遍，半小時，有信心胡言亂語定可上五百字後，沒再搞過AWA

成績:五、六個小時，五分

體會:
1.不須微言大義，就如上例什麼自律自尊的狗屁，不要想太多，應用「傻子原則」，題目說什麼就附和可以了
2.數大便是美，字少，除非你是林肯、沙土比啞，不然還是努力擠字吧
3.有template，非MBA者可保3.5-4分
4.舉例不需微妙精湛，敗者舉的例都令人發笑，網上正氣浩然的例子，不要說是背了，我連看都會暈倒
5.一定要看過題目，「言不及義」沒有關係，但不能「風馬牛不相干」的東東寫一大堆
6.腦筋死，不會轉的人，建議還是按照古法為宜。因「無差別流」需要高度的臨場「換句話說」以及「鬼扯」的能力

也許一次經驗不具代表性
二進宮後的成績，應該有一定的信心水平，再跟各位分享
另外，每人背景水平不同，千萬不可囫圇吞棗，應研究過自己的配方後，再自行調製服用，若不管三七廿一者，只是平添敗者罪過，善哉善哉~~~

敗者預祝各位即將應戰的兄弟順利，還有，先謝過各位的JJ
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回复：bucks無差別AWA心法體會
作者：山间的风 发表于：2002-03-27 16:44:53
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请问你这个方法对于多少年都没碰过英文（更不要提写什么英文作文），而在离考试只有一月带零尚在埋头死啃阅读而无暇顾及AWA的人有用吗？
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春雨贵如油
作者：磨刀霍霍 发表于：2002-03-27 17:52:49
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正为作文郁闷，现在有那么一小点信心了，不过好像我说轱辘话的功夫不高
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作者：bucks 发表于：2002-03-27 19:33:03
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這方法說穿了，就是在最少付出的情況下，試圖產出最大的output

對於些許年沒碰英文的兄弟，當然適用，但須強化造句能力，可以表達你想傳達的訊息。比較取巧的辦法，把一些黃金句型，不須多，五句左右差不多，吃透，到時候來個「照樣造句」或是「換句話說」，輕鬆過關(AWA分數太高固然好，沒有的話，四分以上就夠了)
還有，要注意時間

另外，說廢話能力不高的兄弟，並不是您的錯，而是這本來就不是必要的能力
既然如此，您只好多寫些「大道理」了

作文時間是剛剛好，三百五十字，如果用字用句漂亮，也夠
朋友們須知道時間不夠，是出於打字太慢，還是思想不夠流動，或是腦筋一片空白，然後對症下藥

AWA, compared with math and verbal section, 是gmat中較不必花太多時間的地方，但又不可完全放棄(more and more B schools pay their attention on it)，各位兄弟們加油
重點仍應在Verbal和math
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作者：Grace1979 发表于：2002-03-27 18:57:20
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作文时间挺紧的,用足半个小时才350多个字,真正考试怎么办?
还有十多天.sigh.......
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作者：磨刀霍霍 发表于：2002-03-27 20:43:36
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我比你还惨呀，现在还上不了300

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