OG12 SC105, 求教orz

shijianfeile

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,


(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter


(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter


(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations

(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

答案是选的C，可是为什么E不对呢？谢谢

chchencheng

名字放中间平衡句子

kronorrt

先看句意,这句要表达的是BP capitalized on her keen observation

and love of the natural world in her book illustrations
which she carefully coordinated with her narratives 只是一个非限制

性定语从句修饰 illustration ,如果把这个非限制定从去掉不影响句子理解。

但是在E选项中 ，变成出现两个main verb , Beatrix Potter carefully

coordinated her book illustrations with her narratives and

capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

句子意思已经变了。
从语法上E也有错，Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations,

carefully coordinated them with her narratives and capitalized on

her keen observation and love of the natural world.
coordinated 到底是作为动词修饰bp呢还是作为定语修饰illustration ,这

就是og 解释说的 not clearly modify .

希望能帮到你。

shijianfeile

受教了，谢谢各位