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Hello, Can anyone provide ideas what fallacies does this argument commit? Thanks. Mental health experts have observed that symptoms of mental illness are less pronounced in many patients after group music therapy sessions, and job openings in the music-therapy field have increased during the past year. Consequently, graduates from our degree program for music therapists should have no trouble finding good positions. To help improve the financial status of Omega University, we should therefore expand our music-therapy degree program by increasing its enrollment targets

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1。less metal illness 和 music therapy 没有必然直接因果关系。也许只是巧合!
2。expand music therapy degree 和 increasing enrollement是不是真的可以improve financial status,比如expand 的钱大于increasing erollement收到的钱!
3。job opening in the past并不代表以后也会有。

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