请教OG_SC-218

joywzy

218. Despite protests from some waste-disposal companies, state health officials have ordered the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be published.

the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be
that seawater at popular beaches should be measured for their levels of bacteria, with the results being
the measure of levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches and the results to be
seawater measured at popular beaches for levels of bacteria, with their results
that the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches be measured and the results

答案是E,我选A
若E是that the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches be measured and that the results ,答案就是E,可Eomit the important "that " after the results..
OG的解释是A violates the parallism.一个是不定式,另一个是从句

but an example:

204. In recent years cattle breeders have increasingly used crossbreeding, in part that their steers should acquire certain characteristics and partly because crossbreeding is said to provide hybrid vigor.

in part that their steers should acquire certain characteristics
in part for the acquisition of certain characteristics in their steers
partly because of their steers acquiring certain characteristics
partly because certain characteristics should be acquired by their steers
partly to acquire certain characteristics in their steers

答案是E, 也是一个是不定式,另一个是从句,做并列理解.

这是为什么呢?谢谢.

Louisa_xy

OG里有三种平行：logically parallel、formally parallel、grammatically parallel
218.
A) ordered ...to ...and that...
不平行：to do 做宾补， that 是ordered 的宾语
E) ordered that the levels ...and the results  ... the levels and the results 在that 从句里做并列主语

204.partly to...partly because...一个说明目的，一个说明原因，是逻辑上的平行。

joywzy

218, E 中后一个that 省略了,有时在OG中又不能省略that,这是怎么回事?怎么判断能否省略that?
谢谢!

Louisa_xy

好像不是省略了that,而是没有必要多加上一个that.

oddyuibe

204中我觉得是partly和partly的句式上的并列，partly连接的两个部分一个是目的状语，一个是表示原因的从句，应该不是并列的

218中，比较起来，E比A更好一些吧，A中to be .....(should)be明显破坏了平行结构

joywzy

250. The company announced that its profits declined much less in the second quarter than analysts had expected it to and its business will improve in the second half of the year.

had expected it to and its business will improve
had expected and that its business would improve
expected it would and that it will improve its business
expected them to and its business would improve
expected and that it will have improved its business

B, the best choice, avoids errors of agreement, correctly uses the parallel construction that x and that y,
而218题的并列省略了that ,这怎么判断是否能省略that?

Louisa_xy

JJ说得太客气了，我们一起讨论：

that its profits declined much less in the second quarter than analysts had expected and its business would improve 这样说应该也可以吧？
有没有that都不是大问题。
218.
that the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches be measured and that the results
这样说不错，但是答案里没有。我们从答案选一个best 就可以了

joywzy

我们从答案选一个best 就可以了   一语中的！

多谢MM！

joywzy

10. However much United States voters may agree that there is waste in government and that the government as a whole spends beyond its means, it is difficult to find broad support for a movement toward a minimal state.

However much United States voters may agree that
Despite the agreement among United States voters to the fact
Although United States voters agree
Even though United States voters may agree
There is agreement among United States voters that
A is the best choice. Choices B, C, and D incorrectly omit that after agree; that is needed to create the parallel construction agree that there is waste . . . and that the government... spends. Choice E, though it retains that, is grammatically incorrect: because E starts with an independent rather than a subordinate clause and separates its two independent clauses with a comma, it creates a run-on sentence with no logical connection established between the halves. In B, the agreement ... to the fact is unidiomatic, and B, C, and E alter the sense of the original sentence by saying that voters agree rather than that they may agree.

在这个题中,平行结构的that , that 若省略了,就不对了.而有的题,如218题又可以省略,真奇怪.

Another exapmel:
98. The financial crash of October 1987 demonstrated that the world's capital markets are integrated more closely than never before and events in one part of the global village may be transmitted to the rest of the village--almost instantaneously.

integrated more closely than never before and
closely integrated more than ever before so
more closely integrated as never before while
more closely integrated than ever before and that
more than ever before closely integrated as
D is the answer. OG:that is needed so that two parallel clauses may be properly joined.

[此贴子已经被作者于2003-2-24 11:09:11编辑过]

Louisa_xy

that不能省略是因为that 后面是个句子there is...必需要that连接