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44. Using a Doppler ultrasound device, fetal heartbeats can be detected by the twelfth week of pregnancy.
(A) Using a Doppler ultrasound device, fetal heart-beats can be detected by the twelfth week of pregnancy.
(B) Fetal heartbeats can be detected by the twelfth week of pregnancy, using a Doppler ultrasound device.
(C) Detecting fetal heartbeats by the twelfth week of pregnancy, a physician can use a Doppler ultrasound device.
(D) By the twelfth week of pregnancy, fetal heartbeats can be detected using a Doppler ultrasound device by a physician.
(E) Using a Doppler ultrasound device, a physician can detect fetal heartbeats by the twelfth week of pregnancy.
Choice A presents a dangling modifier. The phrase beginning the sentence has no noun that it can logically modify and hence cannot fit anywhere in the sentence and make sense. Coming first, it modifies heartbeats, the nearest free noun in the main clause; that is, choice A says that the heartbeats are using the Doppler ultrasound device. Choice B contains the same main clause and dangling modifier, now at the end. Contrary to intent, the wording in choice C suggests that physicians can use a Doppler ultrasound device after they detect fetal heartbeats. In choice D the phrase using ... device should follow physician, the noun it modifies. Choice E is best.
我觉得文中对b 的解释不很充分,因为介词短语放在句尾其逻辑主语不一定要和主句主语一致,请大虾们指教。
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use这个动作没有发出者
世界上没有一样东西可以取代毅力,才干不可以,怀才不遇者比比皆是,一事无成的天才很普遍;教育也不可以,世上充满了学而无用的人.只有毅力和决心无往而不胜.

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可不可以认为是暗含,或者不需指明,关键问题是按og 所说介词短语放在句尾其逻辑主语也应一定要和主句主语一致,对吗?

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以下是引用wubin在2003-4-16 11:53:10的发言:
可不可以认为是暗含,或者不需指明,关键问题是按og 所说介词短语放在句尾其逻辑主语也应一定要和主句主语一致,对吗?


B中的using a Doppler ultrasound device.是动名词表示伴随动作,逻辑主语和主句主语一致。
优秀是一种习惯。

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可我记得白勇讲过,在介词短语,分词短语放在句尾时其逻辑主语不一定要和主句主语一致,请确认,能详述吗?thank you.

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