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6. Because young children do not organize their attention or perceptions systematically,[U] like adults[/U], they may notice and remember details that their elders ignore.
(A) like adults
(B) unlike an adult
(C) as adults
(D) as adults do
(E) as an adult

I know the answer should be  D.

But I'm not sure about the comma and want to  know how to correct the sentence by using "as adults do" or "like adults" or "unlike adults".  

Attention:
the following sentences may need some change to be correct, I'm not sure and put them here for your help.

eg.
1.
Because young children do not organize their attention or perceptions systematically as adults do, they may notice and remember details that their elders ignore.
(no comma before "as adults do")

2.
Because young children do not organize their attention or perceptions systematically, as adults do, they may notice and remember details that their elders ignore.
(a comma before "as adults do")

3.
Yong children may notice and remember details that their elders ignore, because they do not organize their attention or perceptions systematically like adults.
(no comma before " like adults")

4.
Yong children may notice and remember details that their elders ignore, because they do not organize their attention or perceptions systematically,like adults.
(a comma before" like adults")

5.
Because unlike adults, young children do not organize their attention or perceptions systematically, they may notice and remember details that their elders ignore.
(no comma before "unlike adults")

6.
Because,unlike adults, young children do not organize their attention or perceptions systematically, they may notice and remember details that their elders ignore.
(a comma before "unlike adults")

7.
Because young children,unlike adults, do not organize their attention or perceptions systematically, they may notice and remember details that their elders ignore.

8.
Yong children may notice and remember details that their elders ignore, because  unlike adults, they do not organize their attention or perceptions systematically.
(no comma before "unlike adults")


9.
Yong children may notice and remember details that their elders ignore, because ,unlike adults, they do not organize their attention or perceptions systematically.
(a comma before "unlike adults")

10.
Yong children may notice and remember details that their elders ignore, because they, unlike adults, do not organize their attention or perceptions systematically.

11.(if there's any other correct one)

Can any  NN help choose or give the correct sentences and explain why?

Thanks in advance.  


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6、在这个句子里like adualt容易在意思上产生混淆:young children --attention or perceptions 。与逗号无关。

1、2意思是一样的,都可选
3、4与原来的错误是一样的
5、7、可以用
6、太怪异
8、9、10的句子结构不太好,但意思是可以表达明确的。
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