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11According to the professor’s philosophy, the antidote to envy is one’s own work, always one’s own work: not thinking about it, not assessing it, but simply doing it.

(A) one’s own work, always one’s own work: not thinking about it, not assessing it, but simply doing it

(B) always work; because you don’t think about it or assess it, you just do it

(C) always one’s own work: not thinking about or assessing it, but simply to do it

(D) not to think or assess, but doing one’s own work(A

(E) neither to think about one’s own work nor to assess it,

it is always simply doing it

A难道不wordy吗?

注释说:

A) best

B) because错,没有因果关系。

C) not…but….应该平行,to do不好。

D) not…but….应该平行,to think or assess不好。

E) it is中it指代后意思错,且run-on。

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确实A是比较的罗嗦,但是别的选项都有明显的严重的错误,借用楼上的话,not perfect but better.
把所有的困苦都看做是有意义的,是生命对你的磨练,也许,是为了让你成大事而做准备。

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没有最好,只有更好,解释说的没错,这里其他的错误都是明显的,而且A没看出哪里wordy啊

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