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11. Based on accounts of various ancient writers, scholars have painted a sketchy picture of the activities of an all-female cult that, perhaps as early as the sixth century B.C., worshipped a goddess known in Latin as Bona Dea, "the good goddess."

(A) Based on accounts of various ancient writers

(B) Basing it on various ancient writers' accounts

(C) With accounts of various ancient writers used for a basis

(D) By the accounts of various ancient writers they used

(E) Using accounts of various ancient writers

OG解释说C wordy and awkward. 我想问一下,除了这个以为,C还有没有别的错?谢谢

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C的with account of的模式属于wordy and awkward;used作为分词定语修饰对象不是十分清楚,当然,从逻辑上讲似乎应该是修饰accounts的,而with account of和used for a basis本身又有意思上的重复,所以,还是wordy and awkward。

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