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有关独立主格结构的一道好题,求NN解答

Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwellings in the Transvaal to photograph the art of Ndebele women,( whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house).
(A) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house
(B) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is varying among women and houses
(C) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and they are in styles that vary from woman to woman and house to house
(D) with murals brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their style varies among women and houses
(E) with murals that are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their styles vary among women and houses



答案是A,为什么呢??
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A,their geometrical symmetries embellished with……and in(和

with平行) a style……独立主格~~
B,their geometrical symmetries are embellished,句子间缺连词;and

their style is varying和主句平行,改变原意
C,同B
D,and their style varies……变成了和主句平行,改变原意
E,同E
另外DE的with的用法我不是很清楚,但原句用whose从句修饰感觉要更清晰。

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B: run on
C: run on
D&E: dangling modifier of "with zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz"

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谢谢大牛的解答!很详细啊~
DE的with好像也可以修饰Margaret Courtney-Clarke 使句子ambiguous

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