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Argument 开头部分模版:

1 The author of this argument claims that … . To support this claim the author cites certain statistics about… . The author also cites anecdotal evidence involving her own experience with… . Close scrutiny of this evidence reveals that it lends little support to the author’s assertion.

2 In this argument, the author concludes that … . To support his conclusion, the author points out that … . In addition, the author reasons that…. furthermore, he also assumes that … . At first glance, the author’s argument appears to be somehow appealing, while a close examination will reveal how groundless it is. We do not have to look very far to see the invalidity of this argument. This argument is problematic for the following reasons.

3 The author in this argument is trying to establish that … . This conclusion is based on the assertion that … . To support this conclusion, the author reasons that … . In addition, he assumes that … . Closely examining the author’s logic and reasoning, we find that neither of these reasons provides the sufficient support for the conclusion and this argument suffers two/three/four serious logical flaws. It will be analyzed in the following parts.

4 Based on an expected increase in … , the author predicts that … . To bolster/justify/substantiate/support/strengthen this prediction, the author cites statistics showing that … / provides the evidence that … / cites the result of a survey that … . Since …, the author further recommends that … . Specifically/ Meanwhile/Furthermore/In addition/What’s more/Moreover, it is recommended that … . The argument is problematic for several reasons/unconvincing for several critical flaws/fraught with vague, oversimplified, and unwarranted assumptions. / The conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the author maintains. / The conclusion reached in this argument is invalid and probably misleading.

5 The conclusion of this argument is that…. The basis for this recommendation is the expectation that … . An additional reason given in support of this recommendation is that … . While this argument has some merit, there are a few assumptions that deserve attention. / At first glance, the author’s argument appears to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveals that it is based on some dubious assumptions.

6 The author proposes that … . Two reasons are offered in support of this argument. Firstly, … . Secondly, … . The argument is unconvincing because the author oversimplifies the problem and its solution. / This line of reasoning is unconvincing for a couple of reasons. /however, the argument is highly dubious, because it commits several logical fallacies, which are addressed below. / The reasoning of the argument, however, is biased due to the inadequacy and partiality in the nature of evidence provided to justify the conclusion.

结尾部分:

1 In conclusion, the author fails to substantiate his claim that … . Because the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to hat the author claims. To strengthen the argument, the author convince us that … . In addition, the author could have to provide more precise information to support his claim.

2 In summary, this argument is not convincing as it stands. The conclusion reached in this argument is invalid and misleading. To make it logically acceptable, the author would have to show that (demonstrate that)…. Additionally, the author must provide evidence of … . Only with more convincing evidence could this argument become more than just an emotional appeal.

3 All in all, this argument is unacceptable (not persuasive/ not well reasoned/lacks credibility). To strengthen the argument the author would have to provide evidence of … (prove that … / present more facts that … / demonstrate that … ).

4 In sum, the author fails to validate the conclusion that … . To solidify the argument, the author should supply more concrete evidence to demonstrate that … . In addition, the arguer should have to rule out the above-mentioned possibilities that may undermine the line of reasoning.

5 To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the author claims. To make the argument more convincing concerning … . The author would have to provide more information that … . The author should also demonstrate that … to make this argument logically acceptable.
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