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1. A representative of the Women’s Bureau of the United States Department of Labor contends that employers who offer benefits which permit that employees can balance home and work responsibilities better, realizing gains in attendance, recruiting, and retention.

(A) which permit that employees can balance home and work responsibilities better, realizing

(B) which permit employees balancing home and work responsibilities better will realize

(C) that permit employees to balance the responsibilities of home and work better will realize

(D) that permit employees a better balance between the responsibilities of home and work, thus realizingC

(E) such that employees are permitted a balance between home and work responsibilities, and they will realize

请问:C 的the responsibilities of home and work会不会有所谓的歧义,需不需要改为the responsibilities of home and those of work

B是不是错在home and work responsibilities 不对称

另外,permit 是不是用permit to do?

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搂主很细心,但是我认为这种用法造成误解的几率很小,因为两个并列名词,意义相对,并列是很自然的,而且是常识性的, 应该没问题。
相视一笑,莫逆于心。

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B, permit employees balancing错,应该是permit sb. to do.

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