请教885的13部分5和21提

mereiful

5.The expected rise in the price of oil could be a serious impact to industrialized nations and severely diminish the possibility to have an economy free of inflation.
(A) be a serious impact to industrialized nations and severely diminish the possibility to have
(B) seriously impact on industrialized nations and severely impede the possibility to have
(C) seriously impact on industrialized nations and severely impede the possibility of having
(D) have a serious impact on industrialized nations and severely impede the possibility to have
(E) have a serious impact on industrialized nations and severely diminish the possibility of having
答案E。请问B错在哪里呢？ a serious impact改为seriously impact 从该文上看，有没有改变原文的意思呢？ 再问一下the possibility 后面是接什么呢？
21. According to the Better Business Bureau, if you fail to advertise the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as prominently as that of the lowest, it violates the New York Consumer Protection Law.
(A) if you fail to advertise the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as prominently as that of the lowest, it
(B) if one fails to advertise the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as prominently as the lowest price, it
(C) failure to advertise the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as prominently as the lowest
(D) failure to advertise as prominently the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as the lowest
(E) failing to advertise as prominently the highest price in a range of prices for a service or products as that of the lowest
答案C。请问这个as prominently as 在C中是修饰什么的呢？

himba

这里如果选D的话，failure to advise as prominently the highest price.. as the lowest 是不是会变成和原来的意思相反呢？读着怎么那么便扭

请NN指点

"读着怎么那么便扭" - 你的感觉是对的.

failure to advertise as prominently the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as the lowest =>failure to advertise prominently the highest price 把副词prominently 放到宾语the highest price 前面来了. 当然有反例, 但 副词一般在宾语后面比较舒服, failure to advertise the highest price prominently.

再看: I study GMAT hard. I eat apple fast. 换个位: I study hard GMAT. I eat fast apple. - 便扭

linlin2008

5.The expected rise in the price of oil could be a serious impact to industrialized nations and severely diminish the possibility to have an economy free of inflation.
(A) be a serious impact to industrialized nations and severely diminish the possibility to have
(B) seriously impact on industrialized nations and severely impede the possibility to have
(C) seriously impact on industrialized nations and severely impede the possibility of having
(D) have a serious impact on industrialized nations and severely impede the possibility to have
(E) have a serious impact on industrialized nations and severely diminish the possibility of having
答案E。请问B错在哪里呢？ a serious impact改为seriously impact 从该文上看，有没有改变原文的意思呢？ 再问一下the possibility 后面是接什么呢？

B的错误:

1) impact on sth. impact这样用是名词. Seriously是副词. Seriously impact on sth.=> 副词修饰名词, 错. The rise could seriously impact industrialized nations就对了.

2) possibility of doing sth.

3) impede 不等于 diminish

diatomss

21. According to the Better Business Bureau, if you fail to advertise the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as prominently as that of the lowest, it violates the New York Consumer Protection Law.
(A) if you fail to advertise the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as prominently as that of the lowest, it
(B) if one fails to advertise the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as prominently as the lowest price, it
(C) failure to advertise the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as prominently as the lowest
(D) failure to advertise as prominently the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as the lowest
(E) failing to advertise as prominently the highest price in a range of prices for a service or products as that of the lowest
答案C。请问这个as prominently as 在C中是修饰什么的呢？

这里如果选D的话，failure to advise as prominently the highest price.. as the lowest 是不是会变成和原来的意思相反呢？读着怎么那么便扭

请NN指点

elitist

a serious impact和seriously impact没有意思上的差异。 通常用have an impact/effect on.
impede是阻止，diminish是减少。意思不同。尽量不改变原文的意思。
possibility2种用法：possibility of & possibility that
possibility to do sth 错误。

equilibrium

5b中impede the possibility用法部队。the possibility of doing
21修饰advertise