请教一道题: GWDTN24-Q30-PP79

franciszmy

Q30P79.

Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress a statue of the goddess Athena and that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena’s father, and giants.

A.Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress

B.Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women had collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which to dress

C.According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress

D.Records from ancient Athens indicate that each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which they dressed

E.Records from ancient Athens indicate each year young Athenian women had collaborated to weave a new woolen robe for dressing

答案是D

这道题做得有点晕。请问一下其他的选项错在那里呢？

谢谢！！！

ashleych

首先根据原文直译，是一个record显示雅典人的什么什么，A，B则是说雅典人根据什么record而做什么什么，排除。E选项indicate后面是宾语从句，不能省略that。

franciszmy

谢谢！ 看来A B扭曲了提干的愿意。有道理。那么C错在那里呢？

kinghades

C很tricky了，平行的问题。

句子结构是这样 Records…indicate that… women collaborated… with which they… and that this robe…

According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress
这里面and前后的两个部分平行，后面的还原之后即是：a new woolen robe that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena’s father, and giants.
不可原谅的重复。。。

Stefaniezhu

如果原文是说根据records，Athenian women collaborated呢？ 就是说雅典妇女每年根据古雅典的记录聚集到一起织东西呢？

julia_juer

１，句首主谓搭配错误：如Ａ，Ｂ，年轻的雅典女人ｂａｓｅｄ．．．
是错误的。
２，ｅａｃｈ　ｙｅａｒ用过去完成时是错误的，如Ｅ中，一般过去时是对
的。
３，ａ．．．robe that they used to dress：ｕｓｅｄ　ｔｏ　本身是个
固定搭配，表示过去经常做的事情，现在不做了。用在这里，容易使意思含
糊，所以舍弃这个结构，如在Ｃ当中，另外，ａｃｃｏｒｄｉｎｇ　ｔｏ没
问题的。

avenue5th

C果然tricky，简单重复没看出来。。