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orchidbrooks

According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.

1. According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.
2. By skimming along the top of the atmosphere, proponents of a proposed new style of aircraft say it could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.
3. A proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours, according to its proponents, with it skimming along the top of the atmosphere.
4. A proposed new style of aircraft, say its proponents, could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours because of its skimming along the top of the atmosphere.
5. According to its proponents, skimming along the top of the atmosphere makes it possible that a proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.(A)

想请问E哪里错了,还有A的 by skimming along the top of the atmosphere这段插入句的位子妥当吗?

谢谢 

rmagpie

"make it possible + that sentence" is not concise.

One word " could" = make it possible;

E also changed the original meaning of the sentence.

yuqinggong

E项主语成了skimming along the top of the atmosphere ,那么前面

According to its proponents中it等于指代了skimming along the top of the atmosphere ,这样从逻辑上也说不通吧?

XIAOHANMEIME

E把原来的状语变成主语,改变句子重心