GWD-24-23 求教NN~

happy8young

GWD-24-Q 23:

Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether theEarth would warm and by how much, but climatologists have indicated allalong that the most obvious effects, and those that would have the largest impact on people, would be extremes of temperature, precipitation,and storminess.

A.the most obvious effects, and those that would have the largest
impact on people, would be extremes of temperature,
precipitation, and storminess

B.the effects that are the most obvious ones, extremes of temperature, precipitation, and storminess, would be those impacting the most on people
C.those effects to have the largest impact on people, extremes oftemperature, precipitation, and storminess, are what are the most obvious effects
D.extremes of temperature, precipitation, and storminess, the mostobvious effects, that they would have the largest impact on people
E.extremes of temperature, precipitation, and storminess, which arethe most obvious effects, are those to impact the most on people

虽然B的the effects that are the most obvious ones 啰嗦，没有A的the most obvious effects简洁；impacting
the most on people没有the largest
impact on people简洁
但在做题时觉得A 划线内第一个and前后句意和语法不平行呀~ 所以就淘汰了~ 选了B  虽然B不够简洁 但答案居然是A！！？
求教NN们~

happy8young

哇~谢谢大家的指教 我有点明白啦

EvaCheng

the most obvious effects, and those that would have the largest impact on

people, would be extremes of temperature, precipitation, and storminess.

个人认为and those ... on people 是插入语，and 表示其额外的有巨大影响的effects

，可以理解为补充说明的none-essential modifier; 如果去掉and, those that ....

修饰前面的obvious effects, 成了同位语，改变了语法逻辑

还有B选项错误，并非一个简洁，简洁不简洁只是一个prefer的偏好问题。
真正的语法问题，依我看是：A选项：the most obvious effects would be extremes

of temperature,precipitation, and storminess；B选项：the effects would be

those impacting the most on people——很明显的看到修饰成分变主体，主体内容变

为修饰成分，这种毫无理由的变化，是不合理的。。。。。

mslancaster

这题OG有雏形的

事实上要是OG刷的细致应该会知道这是一个正确用法

Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to growagain after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, andparticularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.

rmbaos

个人拙见哈，请指教：
the most obvious effects, and those that would have the largest impact on people
and后面的部分像是对effects的进一步解释，those核心词指代effects，that定语从句修饰those
这个结构像同位语，是对obvious effects 大范围里面对人类影响大的那部分小范围的解释。and去掉应该也没错。
让我想起了一个很像的句子：
Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.
这个里面particularly of red wine是对前面consumption of alcohol的进一步解释

and在这里只是强调语气而已~结构无大碍