[转帖]贡献5.5分作文模版一份

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贡献5.5分作文模版一份
去年12月26号考的，今天才收到成绩，真是服了。5.5分，还算满意吧，把模版找出来仅供大家参考，希望对复习有帮助。大概用了一个多星期准备，ai和aa各写了六篇，无模版三篇，有模版三篇。感觉有了模版之后写起来轻松，之前怎么也凑不够字数，用了模版之后都有500字吧。AWA考试很能练习英文打字速度。：） 模版参考了几个CD上的高分和孙远的几篇范文，感觉总结的还不是太重复，大家用的时候也要注意修改一下。ai写了4种开头，aa只写了一个，主体用的著名的七宗罪。
OK, enjoy it! Good luck!
ai:
(1)just refute:
These days we often hear about the concern over the issue of .... The arguer advocates that..., but is this really the case? However sound this argument may be, it only skims the surface of the problem. Moreover, it appears insignificant when the negative influence is taken into account. As far as I am concerned, I believe that... I base my view on two reasons.
(2)just spport:
Recently the issue of... has been brought to public attention. Current wisdom says that... In a sense, ...do(does)...I base my view on two reasons. First, ...Second,...
(3)two points, support one while refute another:
These days we often hear about the concern over the issue of...The extent to which... involves a conflict between... and ... On the surface, it may seem a sound idea that..., but carefully weighing on the mind, I agree that...takes precedence over...I base my view on two reasons.
(4)support both stands- a balanced approach:
These days we often hear about the concern over the issue of...The extent to which involves a conflict between ... and... It seems to me that there are good points in both arguments, and after carefully weighing on the mind, I believe that we should pay attention to both...and....One should take a balanced approach to...on a case-by-case basis.
In the first place, the reason why I have such a view is that...A particular example for this is... Under this circumstance, it is obvious that...
In the second place, much evidence has shown that...Just imagine what would be like if...Hence, another equally important aspect is that...
One argument against my contention might assert that, by nature,... , and that I am simply underestimating....Yet substantial evidence exists to the contrary...For example,... Given this, ...is certainly warranted.
In conclusion, it is in our best interest as a society ... Due to the above-mentioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we may safely arrive at the conclusion I support. If ..., with its claim for...,could be harmonized with the concerns of..., a more fruitful model for contemporary... could emerge.
aa:
In this argument the author reaches the conclusion that.... The basis for this recommendation is that.... An additional reason given in support of this recommendation is that...(The author cites...as an example in support of this recommendation). At first glance, the author's argument appears to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveals that it omits some important concerns that should be addressed to substantiate the argument.
In the first place,
In the second place,
In the third place,
In conclusion, the author fails to provide adequate justification for.... As it stands, the reasoning does not constitute a logical argument in favor of the recommendation. To strengthen the argument, the author would have to provide evidence to prove that.... To better assess the argument, we need additional detailed information about...so that we can establish the conclusion whether....