OG 249 求助

documentwei

249. Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists. was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia. whose music differed significantly from his own.

(A) were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

(B) influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

(C) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to

(D) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to

(E) were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of

ETS解释说 In A, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia improperly modifies many musicians, 请问that引导的句子到底是修饰 aritists 还是 musicians。正确答案B，including elvis presley and jerry garcia,又是修饰谁？

documentwei

但是B中，including 也可以修饰musicians

ballparks

我觉得A中的that前面的was also an inspiration to many musicians不是插入语，那么就不能用that.因为that只能引导限制性定语从句，that修饰的名词和that中间不能有逗号（插入语例外）

B中的including修饰的是musicians,可以从后面的whose music可以看出来。而且这个句子的谓语是inspire, including不可能跳过句子主干去修饰前面whose引导的定语从句中的artists，如果要修饰artists,就应该紧跟在artists后面。

OceanBleu

OG裡對A的解釋

In A, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia improperly modifies many musicians

應該不是說 A不適當地只修飾了 musicians, 而是說 逗號加 that 的用法不好

這裡, including是非限定定語, 而不是 influenced 和inspired的伴隨狀語

這樣理解應該比較好

Youcanmakeit

请问把B答案(B) influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

改成限制性定语从句 (B) influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

行吗？超级蔡鸟语法手册上说限制与非限制是整体与局部的关系，？？

kanstorys

楼主,这到题其实从ETS的角度的考点是be + adj与do的选择,我把它归入简洁类的其中一种,所以扫一眼选项看到influenced....also inspired就是唯一的正确项,建议在考前尽快完成OG每题考点的抽取和分类归纳,因为从ETS的角度,他的出题顺序是1)考点2)正确答案3)编错误选项,在熟悉OG思路的时候看每个选项的错误原因可以知道为什么错,但抓住1)就直接可以知道为什么只有唯一对,这也是我们考试要做的,仅供参考.