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GWD26-24,请教高人

According to United States census data, while there was about one-third

of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, in 2000,

almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home.

A.    while there was about one-third of mothers with young children

working outside the home in 1975, in 2000, almost two-thirds

of those mothers were employed outside the home.

B.     there were about one-third of mothers with young children who

worked outside the home in 1975; in 2000, almost two-thirds

of those mothers were employed outside the home

C.     in 1975 about one-third of mothers with young children worked

outside the home; in 2000, almost two-thirds of such mothers

were employed outside the home

D.    even though in 1975 there were about one-third of mothers with

young children who worked outside the home, almost two-thirds

of such mothers were employed outside the home in 2000

E.     with about one-third of mothers with young children working out-

side the home in 1975, almost two-thirds of such mothers were

employed outside the home in 2000

答案是C,我估计可能是出于平行的考虑,C确实是唯一在结构上平行的选择

但是对OG熟悉的朋友应该都记得,OG上有大量的题目,因为原选项遗漏了转折项而被为认定错误

在这里原选项包含了明显的转折意味,但是C中转折词被完全放弃了

而保留了转折词然而不够平行的D却被保留下来(D似乎没有其他语法错误,读起来也大致通顺)

这是不是意味着平行的意义要大于转折语义的保留?

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意见仅供参考

这里D选还有一点错误是there be句型少选

这在prep的语法中有说明..

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there has no clear reference.

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大家看看work的修饰对象,好象又修饰children的嫌疑,如何区分到底是修饰women还是children呢?

感觉只有C中worked做主语的谓语,说的过去,其他的都不太好。大家看看

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求教:这个句子在逻辑上需要转折吗?

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除了c都无法解决歧义的问题,比如d

even though in 1975 there were about one-third of mothers with young children who worked outside the home, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home in 2000 可以理解成为三分之一的母亲有在外工作的孩子

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