[求助]GWD17-1！

xiaowanwan

Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

1. Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted
2. Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both
3. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted
4. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted
5. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both

请问这题A为何不对？还有请教一下both的用法，谢谢！

mandyuuqq

both A and B  这里的A和B必须要对称

这个题目A选项里面, both A and B 的结构不对称.

A=in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith,   B=Duke Ellington

其实Willie (The Lion) Smith和Duke Ellington是对称的. 所以该题不应该用both A and B

另外: 正常的结构应该是 rooted both in```` and in `````

micklefuer

agree  

所以 ABE 快速删除 因为both A and B 这些选项都没有平衡

C 感觉 缺少谓语 没有动词存在 句子不完整

所以选D

Economics

b的that was可省，不如e简洁

alice2292

QUOTE:

以下是引用micklefuer在2008-9-29 6:46:00的发言：

agree  

所以 ABE 快速删除 因为both A and B 这些选项都没有平衡

C 感觉 缺少谓语 没有动词存在 句子不完整

所以选D

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anchorets

偶觉得是E阿

D中的that was可以应该省略的阿,不简洁

bigwish

到底是E还是D